Help Me Write My Novel!

At present, I am working on a novel, which I will not be posting on Writing.com. However, I decided to try to develop several short stories. There will be one around each of my main characters (at least two, and I suppose I should develop my villain, as well, eh?). My novel is also going to be about time travel, so it will take place in various historical locations. Thus, I will have a third section devoted to stories in various locals.

I have a folder put together to hold these novel developing stories. It would mean a great deal to me if you could check them out. Avlthough I am seeking info on all aspects of my stories, I am most concerned with realistic characterization in the character batches (and whether or not said characters are consistant throughout), and realistic historical settings in my setting batch. Still, one day, I may decide to try to publish these as stand-alone short stories in some form, so please critique me on all aspects; the characterization and setting are just the two most urgent.

Incidentally, I will add to this list as I write the stories, so it will be constantly updated.

Again, thanks!

Characterization:

5,848 words

ID: 924326   (Rated: ASR) Title: The Conference  Description: Trouble at school mandates Caroline's first parent-teacher conference. By: Scottiegazelle

886 words

ID: 1002480   (Rated: 13+) Title: A Modern Day Prometheus  Description: A relic of times past inspires Caroline to fulfill her dreams By: Scottiegazelle

1,424 words

ID: 927352   (Rated: ASR) Title: Isolation  Description: A new future beckons; can she overcome her isolation? By: Scottiegazelle

4,698 words

ID: 925649   (Rated: ASR) Title: The Water Slide  Description: Jonathan just wants to build the best water slide ever. Why is his brother so upset? By: Scottiegazelle

2,839 words

ID: 926412   (Rated: ASR) Title: Snowfall  Description: It never snows in Southern Alabama, and Jonathan's broken his leg. By: Scottiegazelle

2,928 words

ID: 929387   (Rated: ASR) Title: The Crystal Ball  Description: Seven year old Alex needs some magic help; can the crystal ball save him? By: Scottiegazelle

Setting:

Coming soon! I don't know when, but someday!