Sign up now for a
Free Email Account &
your own Online
Writing Portfolio!
Username:
Password:  
Sponsored Items

Click Here To Bid  

Read a Newbie
Badges
Mentor
Presented To:
mars

Testimonials
Tell a Friend
Know someone who'd
like this page?

Email Address:

Optional Comment:

Who's Online?
Members: 293    
Guests: 4836    

   
Total Online Now: 5129    
Writing.Com Time

Thursday
May 31, 2012
4:12pm EDT


Recent Items
By Online Authors
  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Spiritual >> ID #934824  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Eve's Loss
Pulled out of paradise.
Rated:
13+
by
Avg Rating: (5)
This biting yet dull pain gnaws,
Chipping away the petals of me.
I fall to a million pieces
And am lost forever.
I stood in a lush, green jungle,
Hearing the cries of the animals
As I felt paradise.
Here, I crawl;
Clutching my stomach,
My head scrapes on the hard ground.
Blood drips in rivulets.

A rotten chunk of apple
Grows mold in my gut;
Acids corrode the lining
Of my heart, tearing away
At the purity of me.
Lost to the world,
I cry out with the voice
Of the forsaken.

Battling my way through,
I tear at the air around me,
Screaming in confusion,
As I dream of
An amused serpent,
Whose venom was suggestion.
© Copyright 2005 spidey is studying (UN: spidergirl at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
spidey is studying has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Log In To Leave Feedback
Username:
Password:
Not a Member?
Signup right now, for free!

All accounts include:
*Bullet* FREE Email @Writing.Com!
*Bullet* FREE Portfolio Services!