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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #991426  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
Deep Blue Eyes (Triolet)
A triolet about a girl's broken heart...
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Deep Blue Eyes

Hot tears fall from her deep blue eyes,
Like rain that will wash away the memories of love,
She knew he had been telling her countless lies,
Hot tears fall from her deep blue eyes.
She hoped he would never hear her desperate cries,
Her face was as dark as the storm clouds above,
Hot tears fall from her deep blue eyes,
Like rain that will wash away the memories of love.


Note:

According to Rixfarmgirl ...
The Triolet is a French form of verse that means triplet. It is a stanza of eight lines that include two rhymes and two refrains.

The rhyme scheme is as follows:
A line 1
B line 2
a rhymes with line 1
A line 1 repeated
a rhymes with line 1 & 3
b rhymes with line 2
A line 1 repeated
B line 2 repeated
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