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  >> Static Item >> Prose >> Romance/Love >> ID #991890  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
That Beautiful Sun
I wrote this when I really didn't feel like writing.
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Love is in the air.
I feel free, breezy,and light and
it's all because of the sun
that hot, bright, and beautiful sun.
The sun is a delight to
to summer lovers.
It gives a special closeness, a oneness
to their love.

The sun makes everything
seem right, feel right, and look bright.
You can see things that
you never saw before.
You feel things that
you never felt before.

Things like your radiant
beauty that flows outward from within.
You smile and feel warm all over
because you know that you're
being loved by someone
who is decent, kind, and the real deal.
He touches your softness without fear.
His touch is new, natural, and right.

Plans that you once were affraid
to make, you now make with pride. You
know where you want to go in life.
You now have the strenth, confidence,
and courage to do whatever you want to
do. You can now be what you want to be.


It's something about the sun that
makes you feel like you're doing
the right thing and it feels good, and
it feels right, and all because of the sun,
that beautiful, bright, and glorious sun.

It's pulling on you and helping you
to see the light.
The light of life what it means
and what it has always meant.

New beginnings happen, and it's right,
and it's due all to that beautiful sun
that beautiful and lustrious sun,
in all of its light, fire, and glory.

You see his love and his charm.
You can be yourself now!
No more fears of what
others might say about you.

You could care less now
about their taunts, jeers, and threats.
The beautiful sun helps you to see that this
one is the real deal.

He lets you know that he's
yours and that you're his forever.
You've got the real deal.
Your new found love.
He makes you feel like a woman.
He makes you feel like you matter.

He sees in you things that
you never knew was there.
The real you: who you really are:
your softness, beauty, and the love you possess inside.

He sees the caring, and sharing,
you don't have to pertend
around him because you know
that he's the real deal.

You can be yourself at all times:
confident,loving, and real.
And it's all because of the sun,
that beautiful golden, sun
with all it's beauty, fire, and life.

He doesn't degrad you
by making you feel like
you have to compete with others -
with their ugly thoughts about you
that is seen in their eyes and faces.
He sees this, but he dosn't fluctuate.
He stays the same:in love
and in control.


When he touches your hand,
you feel the love and the care.
It's genuine.
He's thoughtful - always thinking
of you and your feelings - asking
you if you need this or need that.
You feel soft and all aglow.
He shows interest in your family.
He doesn't judge.

He's handsome to say the least.
He cares and he's in love.
He shows it not just to you,
but to everyone- well he really
doesn't show it by showing off
because remember he's the real deal,
but he shows it.
Everyone can see it.
He has told your family that he loves you.

Summer love is right because of it.
That sun, that beautiful, glorious sun
and all of its beauty, light, and glory.
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