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  >> Static Item >> Poetry >> Romance/Love >> ID #994474  |   Show DetailsPrinter Friendly Page Tell A Friend
That Look (Rhyming/Freeverse)
At first I felt defeat, but that look changed it all...
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That Look

I saw you today,
My heart skipped a beat,
But you were talking to her,
Then my heart felt defeat.

I know you’re just friends,
Nothing more, nothing less,
She made me a bit jealous,
And to that I’ll confess.

But then I looked to you,
And told you goodbye,
I just cannot forget,
That look in your eye.

You smiled at me,
While waving your hand
And the feeling I felt,
Was hard to withstand.

You have no idea,
Of how I had felt,
That the look you gave me,
Made my heart melt.



(July 1, 2005)
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