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Registered User Est. January 2, 2008 Table Of Contents Product Reviews Membership Info Sparrow I wrote my first story at six years old and now I'm trying to regain those lost ten years. Hopefully, I will develop my writing style so people know what's going on without me writing every detail (it gets boring that way) Constructive criticism makes me twitch when I first ask for it, but after one or two I get used to them as I see that they help me improve. So feel free to critique anything I post.

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