I just wanted you to know without question that I think this is your very best poem yet! Not just a "nature" or a "romance" poem...but ANY poem you've written! In just a number of lines, you've reached the heart of the reader with a work of writing that is living, venerable proof to the words - "Less is More." I think your pen has turned platinum with this wonderful poem, and is proof positive that you have many left in you! Congratulations!!