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"Invalid Item"  [] by A Guest Visitor Mini-review: An ethical will, a zava'ah, a letter of advice... values both told and shown. Parts seem a bit heavy on looking back (memoirish); but, as pointed out, that need not be the thrust of the will. It reminds me a bit of my journal and some of my blog entries in other more personal blogs. The memory prompts seem useful. It has a dense writing style that may best be broken up into chapters. It has very specific advice on how to do it and how to print and save it. This part feels like it should be in an appendix. The idea is solid. The specifics I'm not as sure about. I rate it 4.6. That said, we-all probably should write one. Prompt: What are your values and what do you believe? 5.000+ pages in my hand-written journal. 5.000+ stories and poems. To distill them? My values and beliefs have Unity at the core. The Oneness of Creation and a personal need to connect. Second place for a poem written at the last moment:
I like the pretty red ribbon.  It's 8 lines free verse to the prompt "breaking bubble" from "EXPRESS IT IN EIGHT" , entered into "Shadows and Light Poetry Contest" . Note: Covid-cuff: mask dangling from the wrist. Covid-collar: mask hanging around the neck. Stalk: brisk walk. I need to thank Solace.Bring  for inspiring me. 3.602 |
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