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Rated: 18+ · Book · Spiritual · #1149750
10k views, 2x BestPoetryCollection. A nothing from nowhere cast words to a world wide wind
#1003544 added February 6, 2022 at 6:56am
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tiny messages *
tiny messages
accumulating
brilliant wonder from above...

crisp, white
melts into a sour head...

lightening
for a jar repurposed...

all contained
comes to life...

the lid
lost long ago...

filled hope
dreams escaping...


1.29.21
added 2.3.21
6.20.21 edited
2.6.22 edited

added ellipses like snowflakes to heighten messages of snow in disjointed messages, though not really clear what this is about, still reaching for something to make it pointed, cohesive?

I could move the text about the page to envision snowfall, but only if I see purpose for this piece.

More focused on 2.6.22 edit, the notion that snowflakes from the sky brighten promise, return us to childhood to realize previous hope and dreams in an instant, though fleeting; perhaps a serendipitous signal we can take for renewal or eventually treat like a cruel reminder we cannot complete our earlier visions...but at least be in the moment for once, remember, reminisce, before that sliding door, too, shuts. Maybe, one day, opens again?

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