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These are scenes that I might use in future stories. Read if you want. |
| this story should occur in a very dune-esque universe, where there is an aristocratic class who can indulge in their pleasures at will, and slaves can be bought and sold ad treated however their masters desires. Of course, this is also a universe of some advanced technology. not computer-advanced, but with space travel and other amenities. It could be taken into the Duneiverse if it took place in one of the barely-mentioned Major houses. The story line is about a slave-boy (at least 18 years old) who is bought by a prince of an aristocratic family, and is then taken into the family's home, where he is forced to gain weight to please the prince. I want to affect a twist in the story where the prince disguises himself as one of the servants who is supposed to be fattening slave and encourages him to gain. Eventually the slave and the prince-in-disguise fall in love, eventually committing the greatest taboo of having sex. The slave has grown quite a bit at this point and is almost at the goal weight set for him. Just when he reaches the goal, he is informed by another servant that the prince-in-disguise has been dismissed from the family's service and is most likely in jail or executed. Meanwhile, the slave believes he has never met the real prince and is heartbroken that his love is gone. So when he is finally gained sufficiently for the prince, he is brought to the Prince's chambers, where he mopes for a long time until he finally falls asleep on the large bed. In the middle of the night, he finds that his lover is in the bed with him, and he believes that it's a dream. Sobbing, he confesses his undying affection and begs for forgiveness. The Prince comforts him, revealing the truth. He apologizes profusely for the deception, which was done by his brother's order while the prince was away visiting another aristocratic family on his father's orders. The slave forgives him, and the two begin a life together, the slave growing as the pleasures of his life with the prince increase. |
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