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Rated: 18+ · Book · Biographical · #1399999
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#992988 added September 10, 2020 at 5:57pm
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S&M

"Barrel of Monkeys | Day 8




"S&M"
by Rihanna
from Loud (2011)


All due blame credit due to Jaeyne of the Free Fab Five for introducing me to redaction poetry, where you take existing text and selectively redact sections to create a poem from what's left. Naturally I immediately through of turning an already dirty song into even dirtier poetry. This one's stretching the 18+ rating of this blog... definitely NSFW, folks. *Scared*

Full Redaction Poem

FORMATTED

come on...

feels so good being bad
pain is my pleasure
chains and whips
excite me

come on...
come on...

the affliction leaves
me wanting more

i may be bad
but I’m perfectly
good at it

come on...
come on...
come on...

i like it
i like it

oh...
oh...
you turn me on

give it to me
strong

make my body
say ah, ah, ah

sex in the air
i don’t care

come on...
come on...
come


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