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The Collection of My Haikus ( Familiar Form )
#700693 added July 11, 2010 at 8:57am
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A little seagull



A little seagull
jumps down the cliff, flutters wings,
and then glides through air.




The suggestive change by
lindacheckmate




A baby seagull
hops out from cliff catching air
glides with fluttered wing








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