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Oct 21 Plot Points REV #3


David asks gang to view picture and meet him Eddie tells gang David is a whimp If they go the cops will be there for a shoot out They don't go Eddie goes and kills David. David was told by one member. Cops there. David dies with smile. Theanne ask cops to take Eddie to the painting. He fights but finally looks. He sees what he has changed to -Judas. No response as he goes to jail
Shlo Goldstien calls Theanne He's been told by Director of Guggenhiem to check out painting. Quinton couldn't get the woman to sell. He was ordered to give it a try. He agrees The Director of the Guggenhiem is a distant relative of Shlo. The two have done business for years, under the table. Shlo's contacts got him exhibits that no one else could get.
Chase begins to woo Theanne Theanne asks him if he want to see the painting Chase says no she asks why Chase want her to know that he doesn't believe in all that and he wants them to have a chance w/o all the fuss.
Theanne agrees to a small showing Shlo, Father Jon and Father Frances, Quinton, Chase, Talia and David. At the showing there is much discussion and arguing about who should get the painting. There is yelling
There is a fire in the house. Along the back wall of Room. Between Parlor and library The door is shut, no one can get out. Windows painted shut. Chase had stepped out and tried to get back in. He could smell the smike and panics. Calls fire dept. Smoke fills entry and out of the smoke comes a woman. She smiles at him and opens the door. Then turns and walks to the main stairway.
Chase gets up and runs inside to get everyone out.
It was a smoke bomb, a number of them no fire damage. Chase is questioned as he is the only one out of the room. He tries to tell them what happens but no one believes him. Ms Anne has been dead for 6 years.

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