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Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/books/entry_id/919471-Advice-BW-Final-Cut-10
by Joy
Rated: 18+ · Book · Writing · #2088946
A folder for my writing August 2017 & July 2016
#919471 added August 31, 2017 at 12:35pm
Restrictions: None
Advice (B&W Final Cut #10)
102 words, 25 lines
Free Verse
House Florent Image for G.o.T.


when he looks your way,
his eyes stare at nothing but throw
eerie rays,
and he’s too slow to measure
what you undergo
for he’s someone dead you still keep
in your bed

what are you
unconscious or desperate
punching at the same door
to open
when you know
it never will?

If they fell on you
rats, roaches, voles
or sulphuric fiber optics,
they’d crawl or make a sound
and awaken from
their stillness

And if you might enjoy
having a drink
with demons and evil spirits,
even they would say
“Anyone who makes you cry
isn't worth your love.”


Prompt 10: Anyone who makes you cry isn't worth your love.
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