L'aura del Campo

#22 ktanka sashimi tataki

tataki = haikuish with place
sashimi = haikuish but not a definite place
ktanka = like a tanka
*FF = foto / photo

I wouldn't mind if anyone reading these would comment which ones they like.



721 Scent of lilac — bloomers flapping in the breeze 153a
722 Un-jammed logs floating by — a beaver munching 153b *FF
723 Nasturtiums in bloom — my grandmother long gone 153c
724 The flood clears out the stench — leaves only fear 153d
725 Already under water — what used to be 153e
726 Smell of chowder — taste of strawberry pie 153f
727 Even the plum waits for the rain to stop 153g

728 As he lay dying — perfume of roses and thorns 154a
729 Wings flapping — the diva clucks on stage 154b
730 Poplars bending to the flood — mountaintops still white 154c
731 An open window — onion wafted in by a breeze 154d
732 High river raging — water dogs on leashes 154e
733 Over green, white and blue — flag flapping 154f
734 Lost in the myth (mist) of a waterfall — a tail flicking 154g (Ingrid)

735 Clouds come and go — a sick child sits by the window 155a
736 Eating barnacles — looking down at swirling gulls 155b (Sitio *FF?)
737 Above the cloister — small flowers on the roof 155c (where Evora? *FF)
738 She lies down on a stone altar — sheep (keep munching) do not notice 155d (Arbor Low *FF)
739 A copse called Twenty-Trees — nineteen trees and two dogs 155e (Hayfield *FF)
xxx could be 46,47 or 48 The (old) oak stretches old arms supported by crutches 155f (Nottingham *FF)
740 Even in death — the bishop enjoys his wine 155g (Yorkminster *FF)

741 Cold tears from / heaven — we travel in / a tuna can 159a (CR)
742 Now there's sun /over there — old men soaked / to the bone 159b
743 Windows / fog up — an oxcart / with hay 159c (Cartago)
744 Early May / downpour — the veranera / still blooms 159d
745 We go up / the mountain — rain / washes down 159e
746 Buses go up /as trucks come down — only / one lane 159f
747 The coffee / goes down smooth — but prices / have risen 159g

748 Shrine of red and white carnations — smell of cinnamon and rain 160a
749 Hibiscus — / red before the rain — / and after too 160b
750 Clothes dry in front of a fan — it rains and rains 160c
751 Noise of motorcycles — I pray for rain 160d
752 A chorus of young men — motorcycles in a row 160e
753 Bus half empty — legs sigh as they stretch 160f
754 A beautiful view from the window — Oh! stop the bus 160g *FF?

153 [5/11], 154 [5/12], 155 [5/13/], 159 [5/23], 160abcde [5/24], 160 fg [5/25]

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