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Rated: 13+ · Book · Personal · #982524
Online journal capturing the moment and the memory of moments. A meadow meditation.
#942656 added October 4, 2018 at 1:22pm
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#28 More tataki/sashimi/ktanka
tataki = haikuish with place
sashimi = haikuish but not a definite place
ktanka = like a tanka
*FF = foto / photo

887 Warm milk tinged / blue — a teahouse next / to the pond 244a (Beppu, Japan) *FF
888 What it touches / rusts — blood colored / water 244b (Beppu) *FF
889 A lid above / the geyser — I contain / my anger 244c (Beppu) *FF
890 Rituals / chanted — water lilies soak / in warm waters 244d (Beppu) *FF
891 You could boils your eggs here — your balls too 244e (Beppu) *FF?
892 Crocodiles bask / in sun — as sleepy as / bubbling mud 244f (Beppu) *FF

Not particular happy with these. But... I do need to sit with old memories and just write. I have some stunning photos of Japan and Beppu in particular.

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