Epic Battle of the Pens Scoring Sheets

Round 1 ~ Amendial By Becky Winchester

Round One: Epic Battle of the Pens

Title: "Amenadiel"  Submitted By: Becca Winchester }

For this round, each contestant is asked to create an entire profile for a newly developed character. The character can be for a video game OR they can give life to an inanimate object.

There is no word limit in this round. The more detailed, well rounded and complete the profile is, the better. Special attention to layout and attention to detail will be key elements of this round.

On a scale of 1-25 ~ How well guidelines were followed?


Points Available

On Time: 4
Complied with prompt: 5
Detailed Profile 8
Layout: 8

Points Awarded

On Time: 4
Complied with prompt: 4
Detailed Profile 7
Layout: 7

Total Points Awarded: 22

Comments

On Time: Entry was submitted on time.


Complied with prompt: Video Game Character ~ What game? There isn't much here to tell me Amenadiel isn't a regular paranormal character.


Detailed Profile: We learned much of what makes her tick mentally, but not much physically.


Layout: Paragraph form. Some sentences are fragments, the narrative isn't always tied together, leading to confusion on the part of the reader.

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