Nicely done. Eastern Montana has a BIG sky. I live in the west snuggled between mountains.
I loved the openness of Kansas... one reason why I'm going back to Isan in Thailand. "A little bit of who I am" resonates with wide open agricultural areas.
cold penetrates beneath the layers of clothing
freezing, awful, gripping, winter
bulbous nose is clogged by curds of snot
running, salty, sniffling, February
licking mucus from frozen upper lip
shivering, nasty, flowing, constant
spitting out gurgling wads of phlegm
hacking, coughing, sneezing, incessant
The Mobius form of poetry is an intriguing series of statements alternating with lists of associated characteristics which end with an italicized time element, as described and demonstrated in the following link: https://www.poetrydances.com/mobius.php .
Just being there among the daffodils
is better than a bottle full of pills
to remedy the worst of all my ills
and restore my faith in the field of dreams--
those dreams which take me to another place
away from commerce race with hectic pace,
just soaking up the best of Nature's grace,
while listening to songs of mountain streams.
The Ochtfochlach is an ancient form of Celtic poetry consisting of eight lines with a rhyme scheme of a, a, a, b, c, c, c, b, as described and demonstrated in the following links:
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