*Magnify*
    May    
2017
SMTWTFS
 
1
2
3
5
6
7
8
9
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
18
19
20
21
22
23
24
25
26
27
28
29
31
Archive RSS
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/books/item_id/1517585-WorthyIsThe-Lamb-WorthyAreTheChildren/day/5-4-2017
Rated: E · Book · Religious · #1517585
A treatise based on 2 Acrositcs. A Sanctity of Life write.
** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **




** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **

This treatise is the result of a visit to church 1-18-09, and a song that became the root for the acrostic Worthy Is The Lamb, on 1-19-09 the second acrostic was gelled into the first.

Thankful for the Blogger of the Week nod for 5-31/6-6 from the B.C.O.F.
First time and inspiring to continue blogging on a regular basis.
BLOGGER OF THE WEEK
July 26, 2015 - August 1, 2015
Thank you Lord for the gift of writing.

BLOGGER OF THE WEEK
November 29, 2015 - December 5, 2015

** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **

Thankful for Blogger of the Week not for week of 12/25-31/16; especially since or wedding anniversary is on 12/25. Amen and amen.

Blogger of the week 5-14/20. B.C.O.F.rs united!
May 4, 2017 at 4:01pm
May 4, 2017 at 4:01pm
#910463
I will write anything but "something."
"Something" is so vague and hollow.
It needs to be "something" more, an addition to the thing.
The writer in me want's to fill up that which is shallow.
That which has no pen meeting paper,
Screen that is blank and without purpose.
What can you do with "something" beloved?
Will you fill it in or just let it stand and wonder what "something" is really about?
Let 'er rip!
Copenator out!
May 4, 2017 at 12:41am
May 4, 2017 at 12:41am
#910416
Let's discuss writing critiques or reviews. How do you handle giving or writing critiques in general? Is it more important to just give praise than to actually note what needs work? Or is more important to address what needs work and save the praise? Or do you try to balance both areas? Is it different doing it online like here in WDC then it is in real life where you are seeing the person face to face.

I've actually never had any experience with critiquing a persons work face to face. I know some people can be so defensive of their work it seems like they are going overboard. I think it's possible to get past that point if you can get the person to see that there is good within their "piece' and the suggestions for improvement will help enhance and improve the reading of their piece by others.

When I review online here in the WdC, I look for the positive; hit the highlights and let them know how well the piece flows. When I see something that needs to be brought to their attention, I let them know why the suggestions are being made and so far I've had no reviewee lose his/her temper.

Reviewing helps both people involved.
It's a passion I learned here on the WdC and I'm forever grateful.
Another thought provoking prompt and thankful I was able to pop in and see it.
Miss it when I'm not able to be here as much as I want and that's the truth.
Copenator out!


© Copyright 2022 Steve adding writing to ntbk. (UN: copenator at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Steve adding writing to ntbk. has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.

Log in to Leave Feedback
Username:
Password: <Show>
Not a Member?
Signup right now, for free!
All accounts include:
*Bullet* FREE Email @Writing.Com!
*Bullet* FREE Portfolio Services!
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/books/item_id/1517585-WorthyIsThe-Lamb-WorthyAreTheChildren/day/5-4-2017