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Spiral Bound Journal

by Elisa the Bunny Stik

Rated: 18+ · Book · Music · #2231553

Fictitious and delicious!

Behold freewrites and various fiction exercises! Normally I put these in my main journal(s), but sometimes I need a place that's a bit more visible. You will pry the XGC ratings from my cold, dead hands!

NOTE:

All items in here are drafts. Typos, unfortunately, are a part of life here. I do try to correct them but may not get to it in a timely manner.

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Kåre Enga in Udon Thani

Oct 29, 2023 at 2:09am
In response to "Over Breakfast?"

I really enjoyed this. I know you've been to Brasil but the Brazilian spelling, Jardim Botânico, may confuse folks here, so keeping it "English" may help. "Team Norge" implies that Karl and Inge are Norwegians... as are their names. You pull from what you know... good decision, imho.

"More people meant someone could get to her injection kit more quickly if she happened to have another crisis." Rings true for me personally. When I'm very ill I want someone to know it! Not to necessarily watch me die, but to possibly avoid my demise. When I was choking (late 80s?)I sought someone out who immediately assessed the situation and helped instead of asking stupid questions. Secrets... people die with their stupid secrets.

Your style of writing suits this piece. Well done.

Kåre Enga in Udon Thani

Oct 21, 2023 at 4:07am
In response to "A Quick Look Up"

Ah... Brutalism... a topic you know! Not me... I don't get chased by fans either. There are advantages to being mostly-forgettable.

Kåre Enga in Udon Thani

Oct 21, 2023 at 4:03am
In response to "Meet and Greet"

Jargon can separate the innies from the outties... It's a type of gatekeeping whether intentional or not. All technology should be translated into terms that a reader of YA can understand. Sure... there are details and nuances... but that's only important once general concepts are understood.

Kåre Enga in Udon Thani

Jul 5, 2023 at 1:03am
In response to "The Physicality of the Freeze Frame"

Nice. Your description brings the place and Dana alive. Of course... how old is Dana? Is she as old as my vampires? Some are a bit stiff. Dana seems limber. And, is she really just a photographer? Yes, I want to know more.

QPdoll

Jun 24, 2023 at 6:46am
In response to "Prepwork"

Excellent! This made me feel stressed for her! Great job!

St. Patrickraken

Apr 5, 2023 at 6:58am
In response to "Prelude to One Heartbeat"

Gotta get a prime spot to watch the steeplechase water hazard!

QPdoll

Apr 4, 2023 at 6:23am
In response to "Prelude to One Heartbeat"

This is a fun story. I want to read more!

QPdoll

Feb 19, 2023 at 6:44am
In response to "In the Earlier Days"

I remember those days. Working from home was the only thing I enjoyed about it. I've come to like working from home and am allowed to do that once a week.

You wrote a really nice scene here. Great job!

QPdoll

Feb 12, 2023 at 6:37am
In response to "Wandering the Low Country"

I love pictures. Too bad I rarely take any! I let good opportunities pass me by. I suck at taking photos!

St. Patrickraken

Oct 26, 2022 at 5:42pm
In response to "Back Pocket Moments"

Yay, brutalism!

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#45. Everything Is Up to You
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#44. Social Skills as a Chore
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#43. A Mask for All Seasons
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#41. River Dynamics
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