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by Broken
Rated: 13+ · Campfire Creative · Fiction · Fantasy · #1183805
Perfect for Star Wars fanatics around the globe. Join exciting quests. Save the galaxy.
[Introduction]
Star Wars! Anikan Skywalker and Obi-wan are on their way to the planet of Naboo to save Padme from the evil Darth Vader, who traveled back in time by flying into a worm hole in space. Little does Anikan know that this evil dark lord is him, 6 years from now. Flying towards the once peaceful planet of Naboo, Darth Vader comes to realize that he has traveled back in time. Taking immediate action, he lands on the luscious green planet, with its rolling grass hills and clear blue lakes. He looks at the purple mountain range on the horizon and heads in that direction, towards the capital city where Padme resides. And so the story begins........

RULES: You can choose which kind of character you want: Jedi, alien, evil sith, etc. The four main characters: Anikan, Vader, Padme, and Obi-wan; are playable by all.
TAKE YOUR TIME WRITING! I know a lot of ppl have busy schedules, so take your time.
No one kills another person's character unless they have been kicked out or if I give you my permission.
#1 rule in this campfire: no copying of others characters (be creative) or you will be kicked out for plagiarizing. I'm not really strict about this, so don't worry. But if you copy word for word somebody elses work.......bye-bye.

Well, thats all the rules I have for you, and please, don't forget them.
Have fun and be creative.............. in a galaxy far far away.
: )


Goddess of the Eastern Wind
A Non-Existent User
Name: Alena Starlighter
Age: 20
Appearance: She's about 5'10" with light brown hair and fair skin. She has a muscular frame, and carries a blue saber.
Personality: Alena's pretty quiet, and she knows her place. But something inside her longs to break out, and sometimes that bubbles to the surface. This makes it dangerous for her to remain on the light side.
History: She was trained as a young padawan, so she's very skilled. She even trained under master Windu at one point. Currently, she serves as a guard to Padme, but goes anywhere she's needed.
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Alena leaned against the wall, looking over the night. Her saber was at her side if she needed it, but there didn't seem to be any danger yet. However, she couldn't shake the feeling that something was going to happen.

Padme's chambers were still lit, which worried her. The senator should have been sleeping hours ago. But it was not her place to scold, only to protect.

Her fingers itched for battle, but she distracted them by running them through her hair. These night watches were the worst. She glanced over at the other guard, who had yet to say a word. He looked back at her, then turned away. Conversation must not be his strong point.

She gazed over the city. A ship was coming towards them, waiting to land. Her saber flew to her hand and ignited, ready to greet the visitors.

"Save yourself, young one." One of Padme's men walked out and signaled the ship. "The senator expects them."
Name: Joseph Uraj (Joe)

Age: 23

Appearance: Joe is a massive man, standing at almost seven feet tall, with broad shoulders and a very muscular frame. He has a shaven head and short beard that frames a gruff face. He wouldn't be caught dead without his sniper close by.

Personality: Joe is one of the most joyous men in the galaxy, always one to make a joke and just kid around. His loyalty knows no bounds, and he would rather die himself than have one of his friends get killed.

History: Joe has spent many years at the Naboo sharpshooter training academy resulting in an amazing excellence in the art of stealth, despite his massive size. Joe is currently stationed on Naboo guarding Padme's palace.
Name: Serena Sikora
Light side
Jedi Knight (close to becoming a master)
Age: 21
 
Description:
Serena carries two light sabers. One is (her favorite) a blue double bladed light saber and the other one is a single bladed green light saber. She also carries two laser guns attached to her thighs for backup in case she losses or damages her sabers (which is common with her). She loves to wear tight fitting clothes, but mostly she has to wear Jedi robes, so she just wears her regular clothes underneath. She keeps her long curly dark hair in a braid or sometimes wrapped up on her head in a gold clasp. Her deep bluish green eyes are framed in a pale, long colored face and dark lashes.
Background History:
She was trained under Obi-Wan Kenobi, but was supposed to be trained by Master Windo. She grew up and trained with Anakin Skywalker when she was a child. Basically, she was under Master Windo’s watch before Anakin joined the Jedi, but when he did, she was transferred over to the watchful eyes of Obi-Wan. She and Anakin trained with each other since then, and both were kept from training with the other young Jedi. They believed that they must be special cases or something, but didn't know why. Later, when I turned into my late teens, I was given over to Master Even Piell, to finish my training. He doesn’t like to be around me much, I guess, because he always trains me over the communications system from the Jedi Council, sending me on important quests and tracking down wanted villains.
For 4 years, I have been away from the Republic and my home. I have not heard news of my long ago friend, Anakin, but hope to see him and my loved ones soon.
I was on my last mission, before being granted the title of Master Jedi. And that is where I am today, tracking down a wanted villain by the name Meeko Ghintee.

 
 
I looked at the flashing dials of the inside of my ship with bored eyes. The auto pilot was taking me to the last known planet where Meeko was sighted. Two hours to go until I reach my destination. I sighed, stretching my arms. Guess there’s nothing left better to do but take a nap.
I was snoozing for about 25 minutes, when suddenly a beeping noise woke me up. Startled, I tried to find the source of the trouble. Surely I hadn’t reached my destination yet! My sleepy eyes focused on the flashing small screen to my far right.
“What the?”, I said.
The statistics on it were telling me that a subspace wormhole just opened up not far from where I was. I scanned the details some more, my boredom replaced with interest. It told me that the wormhole closed up almost immediately after it opened and that traces of a small unknown ship came out at that particular spot. Furthermore, the traces of the unidentifiable ship were heading for the planet Naboo, not that far away. I tried to reach Master Piell, but it didn’t go through. I left him a transmission message telling him about my findings and then sped my ship on a new course, Naboo.

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Alena bowed her head as the ship landed, hoping to avoid the wind. However, her hair came out of its knot and fell into her face. She left it down, more interested in their visitors at the moment.

"Master Kenobi... Skywalker." She nodded, forcing herself to remain calm. It had been so long since any jedi visited.

Obi Wan nodded in return, but Anakin seemed distracted. Probably thinking about Padme. She knew about their relationship, though neither of them ever mentioned it.

"What brings you here?" she asked, hoping beyond hope it wasn't serious.

(Sorry it's so short. I have to leave)
I shot a nervous glance over my shoulder at my spotter, and long time friend, Nate. “Who do you think could be on that ship?” I asked him, centering the vessel in the center of my sniper’s scope. “Is Padme expecting any company?

“Not that I know of,” Nate said, his voice barely above a whisper.

We watched as the ship lowered and landed, soon dispensing two robe-clad men. “A couple of Jedi?” I asked, turning to face Nate. He merely shrugged and looked back through his binoculars.

I too looked back through my scope and watched as a comely woman greeted the two Jedi. “Nate, take my position for a bit, I have a bad feeling about these two.” I said, slinging my sniper over my shoulder and smoothing out the wrinkles on my crimson uniform.

Nate chuckled, obviously seeing through my lie. The truth was: I trusted the Jedi completely, but I’d never had the chance to talk with one of them face-to-face and was not going to miss my chance.

I casually sauntered down the spiral staircase that led from the balcony to the top floor of the palace, trying to hide the fact that I was in a hurry. I didn’t want Padme taking up all of their time.

Before long, I was making my way down the corridors and flights of stairs leading to the docking area that the Jedi had entered from. I looked outside, towards the landing pad. Their ship was still docked. I let out a sigh, wondering how I was supposed to find the two Jedi in the massive palace.

Suddenly there was the crackle of static over my communications-link, Nate’s voice was on the other end, “There’s another ship inbound to the docking bay. It should be landing soon.”

“Do we know who’s on this ship?” I replied, scratching my hairless scalp.

“I haven’t received any information on the ship, but it wouldn’t hurt to find out.”

“I’ll be waiting for them,” I said, cutting off the COM-link. I unslung my sniper, loaded a fresh laser battery into the receiver, and looked into the air just as the second ship hovered into view.
 
Something wasn't right. I had that really bad feeling deep down in my gut that something seriously wasn't right.
The planet of Naboo loomed ahead in my view. The unknown ship, from what the data told me, had already reached it.
I murmered a silent prayer asking the Force to guide me as my ship broke through the misty atmosphere and landed on a grassy deserted hill, close to the Great Palace.(/c}
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Alena looked up at the other ship, shivering as her middle became icy. Something was wrong.

"Another companion of yours?" she asked Obi Wan, praying she was only overreacting. But the unsettled look on his face took away her doubt.

"That is why we came. Please, get the senator inside. There is great danger here."
I watched as the ship rounded the hill and touched down on the landing pad. I glanced up at the balcony, where I had left Nate, and saw the barrel of his gun aimed straight at the unknown craft.

Over the sound of the ship’s engines I could hear voices coming from nearby. I took a quick look around and found the two Jedi standing next to the comely woman from before. I couldn’t help but grin; if this was a hostile ship, it occupants were going to die pretty quickly.

The back of the ship began to open and an eerie fog billowed out of the hatch. I shouldered my sniper and peered through the scope, hoping I could get a clean shot. On anybody walking out before they returned fire. A massive black figure loomed within the fog, making a strange rhythmic, hissing.

I centered my scope over the head of the figure and decided that this person wasn’t friendly. “One shot, one kill,” I chuckled, pulling the trigger of my sniper. The gun shuddered, and clicked, but didn’t fire. “Figures; my laser battery is a dud.” I grumbled, ejecting the cartridge.

I looked back at the two Jedi, and cocked my head; the woman had disappeared. Suddenly, the black-clad figure began to move, slowly at first, but steadily towards the palace.

“Stay back!” I yelled, shouldering my empty sniper to look more intimidating. “Who are you, and why have you come?”
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Alena rushed into the building, pulling Padme by the arm. Thankfully, the woman was in great shape, and kept up easily.

The many corridors would have confused anyone else, as they were meant to, but Alena knew exactly where she was going. There was an escape pod on the other side, if only she could get there in time.

She could already hear footsteps behind her, and she knew they would catch them before Padme had a chance to escape.

"Keep running." she whispered to the senator. "I'll hold them off as long as I can."

Padme nodded, knowing better than to question her, and sprinted down the hall.

Alena turned back and took a slow breath, igniting her saber and pulling it above her head in one swift motion. The sound was around the corner now.

Gritting her teeth, she leapt in front of the pursuer and attacked.
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Darth Hardrada
Blakkr Farbjoor Illr
Master: Darth Boudicca
Force specialties: Sith alchemy, Medichlorian manipulation, force reanimation
Race: Neothealisti
Planet of origin: Neothea
Bio: he lives on the other side of the star wars galaxy. A large black hole shadows a system of about 100 planets. At the start of the Sith wars during a large space battle a flocculation in space time occurred near the black hole duplicating a very powerful Sith lord by the name of Darth Andeddu. One of the copies died during the great sith war and was buried with his holocrons on Korinth while the other was shot through the black hole at just the right speed and trajectory that he survived and ended up in the Neothea galaxy. Moving quickly he took control of the system unifying them under one flag and single handedly created the longest lasting Sith empire. He took a neothean apprentice named Darth Boudicca. She lived prosperously for many thousand years after Andeddu died. She took over 100 apprentices but her favorite was a particularly eager child named Hardrada. He quickly graduated with flying colors because of he adeptness in the more subtle sciences of the sith. He quickly was appointed the position of sith alchemist but he wanted more. So he sought to overthrow Boudicca and become emperor but he was nowhere near powerful enough that is until he discovered something. It was a few old sith holocrons in the catacombs. So using these he learned the necessary skills and abandoned his position in search of a safe place to raise an army. What he found in these holocrons was the knowledge of a dark and hidden truth. That of the Jedi. He found that buried deep down was an old Jedi holocron. But he did not like the Jedi way of thinking. But being intelligent he found the sith's way of thinking intolerable as well so he founded his own order. He called them the Blakkr Farbjoor Illr witch directly translates to “Dark Destroyers of Evil” he found it to mean equilibrium in the force. Enforcing it both externally and internally. He found love in his years on the outlying planets. Friends and lovers and then eventually he married. In his teaching he told that fear of loss does not make one weak but a loss of rationality does. Fear makes one diligent and disciplined. Passion makes one strong and unpredictable. And love makes one undefeatable. Hate and love do not walk hand in hand but rather on a line. If you can tread that narrow line between loves and hate that you are unstoppable in the ways of the force. And so Hardrada relinquished his hate and in it found total inner peace and enlightenment. In this state of knowing he knew that he and all he cared about would never be safe with the Sith empire so using his newfound powers of equilibrium and his unrivaled knowledge of force alchemy he engineered a near unstoppable army of clones and with them he scourged the planets of the Sith one by one. Until the only sith controlled territory was the sith citadel on Neothea. There Hardrada battled Darth Boudicca and won the freedom of his people. At this time the wormhole opened up and Darth Vader came through. Due to this paradoxical universe that was created circumstances allowed the construction of an Einstein Rosen bridge into the star wars galaxies and Hardrada and his army came through to find this war torn galaxy…
Description: he stands tall at about seven feet (average for a neothean) slender usually wearing black robes with white trim. He has a large Egyptian Ahnk tattooed on he bald head and he usually carries no weapons.
Name: Dambe Taden

Age: 34

Bio: At age 10, Dambe was a engineer for the Jedi Council, in fact, he made the schematics for the Jedi Temple. At age 17, Dambe wanted to be a Jedi knight, but Yoda didn't approve to this thought. At age 34, Dambe had applied to be an engineer at a Palace in Naboo, Never knowing what troubles he might meet.

Dambe was working on the landing pod, or at least under it, when he heard lightsabers and gunshots. He peeked over the edge and gazed at the battle amidst him.

He looked closely at a black armor-clad man with a lightsaber, being beat up by a Guard he knew as Alena.

He jumped up on the pod and raced to get help, tripping on the stairs, he knocked himself out.

So much for getting help.

 
Salena jumped out of her ship and immediately headed in the direction that the Great Palace was in. She jumped high in the air, using the force to reach her destination faster.
 
There was a dark ship on one of the landing pads and a fight was going down.
A woman with brown hair was shooting at a man in a black mask who was almost 7 feet tall. A ragged breathing was coming from his mask. His whole body was clothed in black, and I realized that this was the creature that had come through the worm hole.
 
Things didn't look well. The laser blasts that were shot at the black creature were waved aside before they could hit him! He must have been trained in the ways of the force. He kept advancing on the poor woman and I noticed out of the corner of my eye a man jump out from underneath the landing pad and foolishly run at the creature from behind.
Lucky for him, he tripped over some steps and was knocked out cold. If the circumstances weren't so severe I would have laughed.
 
My attention was still on the woman, who looked helpless now. Her laser gun was cast aside by the wave of his left black gloved hand and she was dragged up off the ground by an invisible force with the other hand. Choking sounds were coming out of her mouth and she was scratching at her throat.
 
I took my fighting stance, legs shoulder width apart and arms up, and with a backward shove of my left hand I focused on the Force and then shoved it towards the creature with all my strength. The 7 foot man flew in the opposite direction about 27 feet away and skidded to the other side of the landing pad. The guard woman fell to the ground, her breathing coming in huge gasps.
 
I went to the man first, and put my hand to his head. The damage wasn't too bad. No broken bones and maybe a slight concussion. I closed my eyes and healed the bump that was starting to form on his head. Then I picked him up and slung him over my shoulders. He was going to be knocked out for a while. I ran to the woman.
 
"Are you alright?" I asked. She looked really shaken up. “What was that thing?” she asked me as she got off the ground. I looked back at the dark man, who was recovering from my attack.
 
“Now’s not the time for questions” I replied while ushering her in front of me. We headed towards one of the archways in the back and twisted through grand hallways, up stairs, and around corners.
 
“We have to reach a space jet or ship” said the guard.
I kept walking fast in the direction that my senses said I should follow.
 
“Trust me, guardswoman, the Force will guide us.”
 
The woman gave a roll of her eyes like she didn’t care about the ‘Force’.
I glanced at her with raised eyebrows but didn’t question her.
 
As we kept heading further down a huge hallway with pillars, something told me that I wasn’t the only Jedi here. In fact, my senses were telling me that I was getting close to one right now.
 
Me and the guardswoman rounded the corner and were almost sliced in half by a woman with a blue light saber. Luckily I shoved us out of the way a second before hand. The guardswoman screamed and I tried to hush her.
This was a Jedi like me.
She had a look of apologies on her face. I shrugged it off. “I knew their where more Jedi here” I said to break the ice.
 
The woman smiled and put away her light saber. “I thought you were someone else” she said. “And my name is Alena, what’s yours?”
 
“Salena” I replied. “Huh, what do you know. Our names sound the same.”
“Are there more Jedi here?”
 
Alena nodded. “Yes, Obi-Wan Kenobi and Anakin Skywalker are here to protect Padme, who I just ordered to make a run for the escape pods.”
 
And at that, we both ran to catch up to Padme and the rest of the group.
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Alena ran as fast as her legs could take her, which wasn't hard after all her morning sprints. Her mind was elsewhere, so her breathing wasn't a problem at the moment. Then, glancing over her shoulder, she forced herself to slow down. Salena was holding her own, but she could tell the woman was tired of carrying the man.

"Shall I?" she asked, extending her arms. Salena gratefully transfered the burden and they took up their running again.

Alena was grateful to see Padme already in her escape pod. She lowered the man next to her and punched in the coordinates, launching the first of the ten that remained. She walked over to the next one and opened it, motioning for the two women to get in.

They slid in and Alena began pushing buttons. Salena grabbed her arm.

"There's room for you, too."

But,even as she looked in Alena's eyes, she knew the truth.

"You're not coming." she whispered, a statement, not a question.

Alena sidestepped the answer.

"I'm needed here." she said simply, reaching over to push Launch.
Dambe woke up, and looked at the Dark-Armor-Clad person. He raised a lightsaber over his head.

Dambe flinched. He was alive. He looked up again. Nobody was there. And when I say 'Nobody' I mean deserted. There were no ships, and dust covered most of the pod.

Dambe walked into the palace which was also deserted.

"What happened here?" Dambe asked himself. He saw a shadow move past the Throne.

He just then realized he hadn't flinched, but fainted.

He walked up to the Throne. His foot hit something. He bent down and picked up a blaster pistol. He heard a sound

Gun at ready, he moved across the room. When he moved across to the Throne; he turned around to face the B.A.C.P. (or as you all prefer it, Black Armor Clad Person)

It happened in two seconds. They say your life flashes before your eyes, it's true. But Dambe had cheated Death. He fell to the ground, and again, fainted.

 
 
Serena looked up at Alena with a deep expression of determination and will.
 
"Your not actually thinking of sending me off, while you have all the fun huh?" Serena asked as her hand caught hold of Alena's before it could press the launch button.
 
Alena stared down at her with a little smile on her face. "No, I thought you might want to protect the senator and have no fun, but never mind."
 
Serena laughed at the comment. "Me, stay behind while others get to fight and die honorably, I don't think so."
 
It was quickly discussed that Padme should board one of Naboo's Imperial ships with her attendents and as many straggelers they could find.
 
After much reluctance, they finally awoke the unconcious man. He seemed to be having a fit or a nightmare or something. With a yelp, he finally awoke. His startled eyes searched around him, and I felt pity form in my chest for this poor man.
 
"Are you all right?" I asked with concern.
 
"Where am I..............I remember...........remember.......DARK CLAD CREATURE!" he suddenly shouted as if he had teretz.
 
Me and Alena exchanged expressions as we tried to help the man up.
 
"I think he's going insane" exclaimed Alena.
 
"In-Insane?" the man asked with anger. "I am not insane! My name is Dambe, and I....I...NOOOOO!" he suddenly screamed. I nearly jumped from the unexpected shout, but kept my cool.
 
"Its alright, Mr.Dambe. Your safe now" I cooed.
 
"More like lost" murmered Alena, but the man paid no mind to the comment.
 
With much bickering with the Mr. Dambe, me and Alena finally got him to agree on leaving with Padme.
 
"But I want to stay and help" whined the Mr.Dambe one last time.
 
"Sir, how many times must I tell you. You are in no shape to go with us.
 
"Snd besides" continued Alena "....this is a matter for Jedi, not tramatized palace engineers."
 
And Mr.Dambe gave up after that and reluctently staggered up the rampway to the silver ship and the rampway closed.
 
But before the ship could take off, an attack, that was unforseen by both Jedi women, brandished its way into the flight chambers.
 
An enormous group of droids marched their way toward the surprised woman, who already held their ignited lightsabers before them in defense.
In the midst of the group was the robotic looking creature, who's raspy breathing sent chills up Serena's spine.
 
"So, you think that you are powerful than than me, the all powerful Lord Vader!?" he exclaimed at Serena who suddenly remembered that it was she who had force slammed him acrpss the landing pad.
 
I soon regreted it as I suddenly felt a vice like grip around my throat by an invisible force, my airways were closing and I couldn't breath. My double bladed lightsaber fell from my numb hand and landed on the floor with a loud clatter.
 
Alena, the brave woman that she was, rushed at Darth Vader in an attempt to engage a fury attack. But she was quickly shoved aside like a rag doll by just a mere wave of his hand, knocking her all the way across the chamber!
 
"Alena!" I tried to cry out, but couldn't. White specks where starting to pop in front of my eyes as my brain was running out of oxygen.
 
Then, out of nowhere came Anikan Skywalker and Obi-wan Kenobi as they spirled into the chamber, their lightsabers a fury of lights as they made to pieces the droids.
 
Darth Vader became destracted by this surprise attack, that he let me go unconciously. I staggered back trying to regain my breathing.
 
I still hadn't forgotton Alena as I quickly grabbed my light saber and ran to see if she needed help. Glancing back, I saw that Anakin and Obi-wan could handle themselves for a while.
 
Padme's ship still hadn't flown out, and that made me worried. I'll have to see whats holding her up and as I kept running towards Alena, I could see in my mind (guided by the force) that there was an arguement on the ship. I couldn't decifer what it was about, but that it had to do with Padme and something else.

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Alena stumbled to her feet, gasping for breath. Serena came to help, but she was too proud to accept it. She picked up her fallen saber, leaned against the wall for a second, then rejoined the fight.

She was not one to be set off course. Some went as far to call her stubborn, but she simply refused to lie down when there was a battle.

She slowly circled the three, waiting for just the right moment to strike. Anakin was so close to him now that she feared if she jumped in now, she could seriously hurt him. But he backed away for a moment, and she leapt forward.

Unfortunately, this man (if it was a man) was much stronger than the two of them. Even when Serena came, he still fought them back.

Alena's hair came loose, falling into her face in sweaty strands. She shook it back and fought as hard as ever, though her vision blurred.

She was knocked back again, but this time she couldn't move. Her arm was covered in blood from a wound in her shoulder. She tried to get up, but slipped and fell again.

Once she realized that there was no way she could get up any time soon, she reached for a blaster. It flew to her hand and she began to shoot, though there was little hope of actually hitting her target. She could only try to distract him long enough for someone to defeat him.

Even here, she was amazed at Anakin's fighting. The way his muscles were controlled and each move flowed into the next was impressive. Yet the more she watched him, the more she watched their enemy. His moves were surprisingly similar to Anakin's, and something within her told her that it was not coincidence.

She dropped the blaster in shock, then picked it up quickly as she noticed that droids were approaching. They did not appear to be on their side, so she had to prepare to defend herself.

With a barely audible groan. she pushed herself back against the wall and grabbed her saber. She shot at them as she absorbed their fire, trying to keep them away from the remaining jedi.

It worked, but too well. Almost all of them were moving in her direction. There was little possibility of her surviving long enough to make much of a difference.

To her relief, Obi Wan stood in front of her, blocking the attacks as though he never tired. Alena dropped her head back, wishing she could help. But there was nothing she could do until her arm was cared for.

She used her teeth to tear off her sleeve and painstakingly wrapped it around the wound. The bleeding eased enough to take away the lightness in her head, and she stood slowly next to Obi Wan, prepared for anything.

Or so she thought.
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Hardrada watched with astonishment from above the grassy planet as the dark figure started to be beaten down by a young man with a lightsaber. hardrada could see all this from so faar away because he was blind folded and meditating. he had long ago learned to see the force and these two were radiating more force then he had ever seen. and surprisingly there force identities were identical. a paradox. he smiled and removed hi blindfold. he glanced over to his apprentice who was sitting beside him. he smiled and said "I think we should make our presense here known"
Name: Coryia Twilight

Age: 23

Species: Zabrack

Home Planet: Idronia

Appearance: Coryia has tan skin that stretches along her muscular body. She has bright blue eyes. Her hair is a deep brown and is usually in a braid. She stands at about 6'1". She has about 6 horns that crown her forhead and is usually reconized by the strange flower tattoo that circles her left eye. She usually wears a brown jumpsuit with a white cami under it and uses flying goggles to keep her hair out of her face. She usually carries around a bowcaster, a lightsaber, and a WESTAR-34 blaster pistol.

Personality: Coryia is known for her silent ways. She isn't much of a talker, but more of a doer. She is one to quickly judge and will often hold grudges. She has studdied greatly in linguistics and in fighting techniques.

History: Coryia has the ability to use the force. However, her parents forced her to go to a Zabrack Training school where she picked up the like for linguistics. When her parents started to lose money, they took her out and sold her as a slave to Jabba the Hutt. She quickly became friends with another Zabrack there and they attempted to make an excape. They succeeded and fled to Kashyyyk. The two quickly got married and had a child. Then Jabba finds them and succeeds in killing her husband and child. Since then, she has become one of the most feared Bounty Hunters, always on the lookout for Jabba the Hutt.
 
 
Serena took another leep into the fighting, twirling her double bladed saber in a frenzy, tring to dismember the robotic man. Instead, she ended up getting one of her saber blades blown out.
 
'Damit' she muttered under her breath as she quickly took out her green single bladed lightsaber to make up for the loss.
Just in the nick of time, she brought both sabers up to her face to form a defensive criss cross as Vader tried to take her head off of her shoulders. The sound of his saber connecting with hers was deafening to her ears.
 
Anikan, her long ago friend from training, took an opportunity to swing his lightsaber in from behind. His face was a mixture of many emotions, mostly an emotion of fear and anger. Why wasn't he keeping his emotions in check?
 
Obi-Wan broke off from the fighting.
 
Anikans attack was stopped in mid swing as Vader held him in place with the force, while his other hand (with the lightsaber) was still bringing down all his weight on Serena. She tried not to buckle or falter knowing that any move like that would mean her death. She glanced back towards the helpless Anikan, her brain a frenzy of what to do.
 
She could feel Alena somewhere behind her with a really bad shoulder wound while Obi-wan was tending to her. Knowing Alena, she was probably being stubborn. Sure enough, blaster ions shot through some open space, hitting Vader in the chest (Alena's doing), trying to distract him. But the heavy armor he was wearing seemed to do a fine job of protecting him. Then the shots stopped.
 
"You cannot defeat me, young one", he rasped at Serena.
"Join me, and I will not destroy you."
 
Serena gasped as the weight doubled on her. Her hands held a vice like grip on both her sabers as sweat rolled down her face and neck from the pressure of holding him off.
 
Vader laughed. "You are so pitiful. You always have been, even when we trained together. One last chance, Serena. Join me and the dark forces, or die!"he growled.
 
Serena almost dropped her sabers from shock. It all became clear now.
The worm hole, the way his moves matched Anikans, his recent comment towards her. THIS WAS ANIKAN!!! IT COULDN'T BE!!! she screamed inside her head.
"No!" she yelled.
 
Around her, she could distinctly hear the sounds of lots of droids entering the chamber.
 
She glanced back at Anikan, and she knew that he could read her expression as if her mind was like an open book, for his own expression changed to pure horror and anger.
 
It seems as if that was enough to break the bond Vader had on him because with a loud yell, Anikan broke the bond and force shoved Vader away from him and across the huge chamber. Vader yelled out in surprise as he flew 176 feet into the air.
 
 

BACK ON PADMA'S SHIP
 
 
 
"Common, my lady. We have to leave now!"
 
Padme had a stubborn expression set on her face.
"I refuse to leave and let these Jedi get slaughtered!" she ordered.
Her mind was stuck on Anikan. What if he got hurt?
What about Obi-wan and the rest of the Jedi who had helped save her life as well as the others?
 
She was in the cockpit with Ransom, her male lead flight attendent; and two pilots. The rest of the crew and ppl crowded around on the outside of the cockpit door, trying to listen in. This arguement had gone on since they boarded.
 
"My Lady, the Jedi are doing their job. So we need to do ours and protect the ppl on this ship. We need to leave now!" he ordered back.
 
Padme bit her lip to keep the tears from forming. She looked out the cockpit window to find Anikan. If he was doing fine, then she would leave. But if not.........
 
She could see Anikan was in danger. His form was held still with this lightsaber held over his head like he was going to bring it down on the black robotic man.
Padme stiffled a gasp with her hand. Ransom was looking at her weirdly while tracing her glance to Anikan.
 
"Padme, you shouldn't get attached to Jedi. It won't do you good to get attached. Now, please, we need to put your wants aside and start thinking about the others." he whispered in her ear.
 
"Anikan", she whispered. I love you.......
 
She tore her eyes off of Anikan and looked back at Ransom.
She gave a tiny nod and started to turn away to go to her chambers when a sudden peircing beeping noise sounded out on the cockpits controls.
 
"Whats that?" both Ransom and Padme asked.
 
One of the pilots analyzed the source.
"The ships radar system is saying that there are a bunch of droids heading towards the chamber. About 600 or so."
 
The cockpit was silent.
 
"We've got to do something" Padme nearly shreeked.
 
Ransom looked worried again. "No, we have to LEAVE! We have you to protect also. Does your life mean anything to you?"
 
Padme glared at him with piercing brown eyes, her lips formed a tight thin line. Her rage made her quiver like an imaginary earthquake was happening.
 
"How dare you say such a thing to me!" she growled.
"I would gladly lay down my life for others, rather than run away like a self pitiful coward like YOU, Ransom" her voice escelated to a scream.
 
Ransom edged away from her, his face turned away in embarresment. "Sorry My Lady" he mumbled.
 
"We are not leaving until we have every Jedi on board with us!" she commanded, glaring at everyone as she did.
 
Nobody said anything else, for they all knew that when Padme put her foot down it was final.
 
"Aim for the droids when they come in........" she ordered the piolits.
 
 
 
 

BACK TO SERENA
 
 
As Vader flew across the room, the hundreds of droids started to enter the chamber. Obi-Wan and Alena were already killing off a few, but it wasn't enough.
 
"Are you alright?" Anikan asked Serena worried.
His face was a painful mess to look at. The left side of his face had a deep cut on it that started on his temple, came down past his left eye, and ended right below it.
 
I tore off a bit of my jedi robe, not caring much about it.
"Come here" I ordered.
 
Anikan glanced at Obi-wan and Alena. "But we shou-"
 
"Your going to lose a lot of blood damit, so get your ass over here so I can stop the flow!" I ordered.
 
He obeyed. I wraped the piece of cloth tightly around his head, but more blood seeped through. I tore off more cloth and wrapped a second layer around his head. The flow finally stopped. Serena then laid her hands on top of his head and did a little force healing, a technique that only she mastered out of all the other Jedi. She was only a little good at it, though.
 
"There" I exclaimed.
 
"It feels better"he said shocked. "Must have learned new techniques, huh?"
 
"Sure did" she gave him an impish grin. The same grin she would always give him when they were children.
 
He stared into her face. "It's been a while Serena, god. I missed you once you left", he gushed.
 
Serena laughed. "Don't get all mushy on me now. We have to talk later."
 
Anikan nodded, understanding the double meaning to her words.
 
As we ran to help aid Obi-wan and Alena, Anikan said "That is, if we survive"
 
Serena's face became hard, if she were to die, should would want to die fighting.
 
Before they could reach the others, huge blasts of fire flew past them towards the droids.
 
"WO!" Serena and Anikan yelled as the heat from the blasts nearly singed them.
 
The blasts were coming from Padme's ship. Anikan frowned on the fact that she hadn't left yet. Serena took no notice as she continued slaughtering droids.
 
"We have to get out of here!" she called to the others. In the back of her mind, she didn't want to fight Vader again. She looked back to where he last was and noted with ease that he was still down on the floor 596 ft away.




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Alena was only slightly aware of the stiffness in her joints when she rose. However, the ache in her heart was greater than that in her body as she saw them.

The fallen jedi.

Some of them she knew, even trained with. She had to force herself to push her feelings aside, lest she cross a line in a fit of vengeance.

Obi Wan dragged her quickly to the ship, careful to hold the uninjured arm. She was grateful for that, since it still burned. Too many times she'd had wounds ripped open by a careless gesture.

The ramp lowered for them, but they managed to get inside before it even touched the floor. Padme immediately flew to them, though Alena noticed her gaze lingered on Anakin. She looked into his eyes as well, remembering his similarity to the black figure. There was a strange fire in them, one she had never seen, and it frightened her.

Obi Wan stepped forward. "There are injuries that need to be cared for." he said softly, gesturing to Anakin and Alena. "Where are your droids?"

Padme nodded and led them to the back, stumbling as the ship took off. Anakin took her arm to steady her, his hand lingering longer than was needed.

They were seated side by side on a bench, where one of the healing droids saw to them. Padme settled herself across from them, but Alena forced herself not to stare, though the tense feelings nearly suffocated her.

All thoughts suddenly leapt from her mind as an explosion of pain leapt down her arm. The droid, even well programmed, could not help that the cloth had sealed onto the gash. She groaned, distracting Anakin. He held her hand, almost as an afterthought, and let her squeeze it until his fingers turned white.

She would feel childish afterward, but now the pain was too great for her to dwell on that. Agony was all she knew until the droid spread a cold ointment on her freshly closed skin.

She dropped back, breathing hard. Now eased, she watched the droid care for Anakin, whose wounds were already mostly healed. He had released her hand, not in enough pain to risk his own pride.

"Thank you." she whispered, once they were finished. "I had not thought it was that deep."

"You were probably a little distracted at the time." he smiled.

She clenched her fist and flexed her muscles, testing her strength before rising. Her shoulder was still sore, but she knew Anakin wanted a moment with Padme.

"Senator." she called over her shoulder. "I trust you will not disobey my orders again." Then she winked, sparking a grin from the young woman.
{c/blue}*Hey everyone. I know that this camp fire hasn't been rolling lately and I think I understand. But I do wish that it keeps going. I'd hate to extinguish one of my camp fires. It's been fun w/ you all.

But as much as I want it to go on, my life is changing too. I am soon to be at the Air Force Basic Training in Texas and so I won't have time for this kind of stuff. Maybe in 4 months or so. SO, wish me luck and so long................*

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