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Rated: E · Campfire Creative · Appendix · Horror/Scary · #1965834
The death of his family has driven him to death or has it freed him?
[Introduction]
Crime Scene
A campfire by GroovyStella and The Run-on King

GroovyStella turn one:
"What's wrong with Spencer, Mommy?" Abigail asked but ran from the room after taking one look in her eyes.

“Abby! What’s wrong?” Christian asked softly. “Did she hit you again? Its okay I won’t tell on you!
I wish I could help Spencer.” Abby nodded no.

Christian said, “Why is he crying? He should listen to us and stop upsetting mommy. I hope daddy gets here soon.”

"I love you Spencer," she whispered in his ear as she cuddled him. Her tears flowed as she placed his body under the water in the bathtub. She used more strength than she thought she would have to.

Brett Turn one:
When Abby and Christian noticed the baby was quiet. Abby spoke, “Christian lets go see if mommy is better now. I am hungry and I want to know everything is all right.”

Abby slowly crawled out from under her bed. She heard small noises from the bathroom, but went into the kitchen looking for a glass of water, and to wait for mommy to finish changing the baby’s diaper.

"Abby can you come in here for a minute?" Tina called.

"I don't know if I can do this." She whispered.

GroovyStella’s Turn Two:
A tear found its way down her cheek when Abby walked into the bathroom. She closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and said, "Mommy is going to help you with your bath tonight, so I need you to come in and get undressed."

As Abby climbed into the tub, Tina stroked her hair and whispered, "I love you sweet girl."

With that she grabbed Abby and tried to put her under, but Abby fought so hard that Tina was losing control.

"Mommy, what are you doing? Please don't Mommy, please!" Her little girl cried.

Brett’s Turn Two:
Tina held Abby still and cried, "I'm sorry Abby." As she slammed Abby’s tiny soft brown hair covered head against the side of the tub.

Christian heard Abby’s scream. He was so scared all he could do was freeze. The house went silent after that. Christian heard mommy say, “It’s alright now Abby, and you no longer have to cry or be afraid anymore.”

Tina called out, “Christian where are you honey?”

Christian cried out softly as the fear froze him again! He knew he had to run to leave the house but he just couldn’t move. Mommy came into the room and gently picked him up and placed him on Abby’s bed.

GroovyStella’s Turn Three:
She gently stroked his soft blond hair. The look on her face kept his fear in place.

"You know I love you, don't you?" She asked holding him in her lap. "And I'll always do what's best for you and your brother and sister. Do you trust me Christian?"

He slowly nodded his head and asked, "Where is Spencer and Abby?"

“They're in my room waiting for Daddy. It's time to get you ready to go." She was thinking how much he looked like his father. His face was so sweet and innocent. She pulled him close and held him tight.

Brett’s Turn Three:
"Mommy?" Christian spoke with tears on his face.

"Shh baby, it's okay. Mommy's sorry.

Christian let out a scream when the knife pierced his stomach.

She felt her oldest child go limp and as she stood to carry his body to the bed to lay him down next to his sister, she stopped, laid him on his bed, and pierced his throat below the ear and didn't stop until she reached the other ear.

GroovyStella’s Turn Four:
Tina got Christian's blanket, wrapped him in it, and laid him next to his sister.
She made her way back to the bathroom to clean her son's blood from her hands when the phone rings.

Tina quickly washed her hands and ran to the phone. She had reservations, who could be calling her especially now? She built up her courage again, and quickly picked it up. She fumbled with it a few times and finally held it steady as she answered, “Hello?”

A strong male voice answered, This Sergeant Hanson with the State Patrol. I have some bad news Mrs. Hudson. I regret to inform you that your husband has died in a car accident on the way home today. Do you have a preference where the body is sent? We recommend Johnsons funeral parlor if you don’t have any choice.

Tina had no answer to come back all she could think of was Daniel was dead! The voice in her mind snapped, answer him fool or you’ll give it all away!

Brett’s Turn Four:
Tina found her voice and asked, “Are you sure it is Daniel?”

Officer Hanson answered, “Yes mam we are.”

Tina spoke in a sobbing shaking voice, “Officer Hanson, Johnsons will do just fa fa fine.” Tina started sobbing uncontrollably now.

Officer Hanson spoke, “I’ll let you go now if you need any help or have any questions you can always reach me at the State Highway Patrol number listed in the phone book mam.”

GroovyStella’s Turn Five:
After saying that, he hung up something just didn’t feel right about the way she was crying hysterically. He ordered a patrol car to her house.

When the officers arrived there was no answer to the knock or to the doorbell. He tried the door it wasn’t locked. Officer Sperry and his partner walked in calling out for Tina. There was no answer, it was quiet.

They call in and received orders to search the house since it was unlocked.

Officer Sperry found her and the children in the master bedroom. Tina was dead with a knife through her neck. He backed out of the room and called into dispatch.

Brett’s Turn Five:
Both officers waited downstairs for the local police to arrive as well as the crime scene investigators.

Ronald Harry the detective in charge showed up first. He began by questioning the two officers about what they had found.

Officer Sperry spoke, “What I don’t understand is how Officer Hanson knew to send us here?”

After the CSI had cleaned up and left Officer Sperry spoke, “Hey Ronald did CSI find any prints on the knife in Tina’s throat?” Ronald replied, “No we still don’t know who killed Tina.”
Do it now Tina, before Daniel get's home because you know he's taking the kids tonight and you can't let him do that. Remember, we talked about this and if you don't listen to me you'll never see these kids again.
"What's wrong with Spencer Mommy?" Abigail asked. "Why is he crying so much?"
"What's wrong with Spencer Mommy?" Abigail asked. "Why is he crying so much?"

Abigail took one look at mommy’s eyes and she ran from the room. She ran to her bedroom and hid under the bed. Christian ran into her room after her
.
He whispered softly to her, “Abby, what’s wrong? Did mommy hit you again? It’s ok Abby I won’t tell on you!”

“Christian, mommy’s not herself did you look into her eyes? I’m so scared what can we do? I hope Daddy will get here soon and take us away.”

Spencer is still crying and screaming in the back ground. Christian softly replies, “I wish I could help Spencer. Why is he always crying? He should listen to us and stop upsetting mommy. I hope daddy gets here too. Abby, mommy isn’t mommy anymore and I’m scared too!”
Tina kept her hand over Spencer's mouth and nose to silence him because her nerves couldn't take the screaming anymore.
"I love you Spencer," she whispered in his ear as she cuddled him. She removed her hand and carefully placed him in the bathtub that had just filled up. Her tears flowed as she held his body under the water. She used more strength than she thought she would have to.
You're doing the right thing here Tina, she heard him say as she held the fighting baby under the water. Just hold on, he will settle down in a minute.
Finally, baby Spencer went limp and as the tears were flowing fast, she swaddled him in his favorite blanket and walked him to her bedroom where she laid his listless body on the bed.
When Abby and Christian noticed the baby was quiet.

Abby spoke, ”Christian lets go see if mommy is better now. I am hungry and I want to know everything is all right.”

Christian replied, ”I don’t know Abby I feel even more scared it is too quiet. But I want mommy better maybe you should go check on mommy.”

Abby slowly crawled out from under her bed. She stopped and brushed off her dress and headed out the door to find mommy. She heard small noises from the bathroom. She went into the kitchen looking for a glass of water, and to wait for mommy to finish changing the baby’s diaper. Just like she always does in the bathroom.
"Abby can you come in here and help Mommy for a minute?" Tina called.
"I don't know if I can do this." She whispered.
You can and you will Tina because you know this is the only way to see them again and if you don't Daniel will control them and turn them against you.
A tear found it's way down her cheek when Abby walked into the bathroom. She closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and said, "Mommy is going to help you with your bath tonight, so I need you to come in and get undressed."
As Abby climbed into the tub, Tina stroked her hair and whispered, "I love you sweet girl."
With that she grabbed Abby and tried to put her under, but Abby fought so hard that Tina was losing control.
"Mommy, what are you doing? Please don't Mommy, please!" Her little girl cried.
"Oh my God," Tina cried. "I can't do this!" Tina yelled while struggling with Abby.
Hit her head Tina and she will go out. Slam it Tina! He told her.
Tina held Abby still and cried, "I'm sorry Abby." As Tina slammed Abby’s tiny soft brown hair covered head against the side of the tub.
Christian heard Abby’s scream. He was so scared all he could do was freeze. The house went silent after that. Christian heard mommy say, ”It’s alright now Abby you no longer have to cry or be afraid anymore.”
Tina called out, ”Christian where are you honey?”
Christian cried out a soft cry as the fear froze him again! He knew he had to run to leave the house but he just couldn’t move. Mommy came into the room and gently picked him up and gently placed him on Abby’s bed. She gently stroked his soft blond hair. The look on her face kept his fear in place.
"You know I love you, don't you?" She asked holding him in her lap. "And I'll always do what's best for you and your brother and sister. Do you trust me Christian?"
He slowly nodded his head then asked, " Where is Spencer and Abby?"
"They're fine honey, They're in my room waiting for Daddy. It's time to get you ready to go." She was thinking how much he looked like his father. His face so sweet and innocent. She pulled him close and held him tight.
"Mommy?" Christian spoke with silent tears on his face.
"Shh baby, it's okay."
Do it Tina. What are you waiting for? Daniel will be here any minute. You've cleansed the other two and if Christian ever has a chance of making it to Heaven, where you'll see him again, you have to do it now. He said in a hushed but officious voice. She knew he was right.
As she felt his breathing speed up and his body shake from crying, she whispered her next apology, "I'm sorry baby."
Christian let out a scream when the knife pierced his stomach.
Make sure he's gone Tina. He urged her
She felt her oldest child go limp like the others and as she stood to carry his body to the bed to lay him down next to his sister, she stopped, laid him on his bed, and pierced his throat below the ear and didn't stop until she reached the other ear.
Tina got Christian's blanket, wrapped him in it, and laid him next to his sister.
She made her way back to the bathroom to clean her son's blood from her hands when the phone rings.
Tina quickly washed her hands and ran to the phone. She had reservations, who could be calling her especially now? She built up her courage again, and quickly picked it up. She fumbled with it a few times and finally held it steady as she answered, “Hello?”
A strong male voice answered, “This Sergeant Hanson with the State Patrol. I have some bad news Mrs. Hudson. I regret to inform you that your husband has died in a car accident on the way home today. Do you have a preference where the body is sent? We recommend Johnson’s funeral parlor if you don’t have any choice.”
Tina had no answer to come back all she could think of was Daniel was dead! The voice in her mind snapped answer him fool or you’ll give it all away!
Tina found her voice and asked, “Are you sure it is Daniel?”
Officer Hanson answered, “Yes mam we are.”
The voice returned Tell him that Johnson's will be fine, Just get rid of him we have work left to do.!
Tina spoke in a sobbing shaking voice, “Officer Hanson, Johnson’s will do just fa fa fine.” Tina started sobbing uncontrollably now.
Officer Hanson spoke, “I’ll let you go now if you need any help or have any questions you can always reach me at the state patrol number listed in the phone book mam.”
After saying that he hung up something just didn’t feel right about the way she was crying hysterically. He ordered a patrol car to her house.
When the officers arrived there was no answer to the knock or to the doorbell. He tried the door it wasn’t locked. Officer Sperry and his partner walked in calling out for Tina. There was no answer, it was quiet. They call in and received orders to search the house since it was unlocked.
Officer Sperry found her and the children in the master bedroom. Tina was dead with a knife through her neck. He backed up and called in multiple murders found.


The End!

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