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by Joy
Rated: 18+ · Message Forum · Writing · #1013410
Write poetry from prompts just for the fun of it; formal or free verse, you pick.
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Nov 30, 2005 at 2:56pm
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Re: Prompt 1
by Joy
so nice to see such a beautiful poem on one of the most meaningful songs.
"The sky is gray and white and cloudy,
Sometimes I think it's hanging down on me.
And it's a hitchhike a hundred miles.
I'm a rag-a-muffin child."
One suggestion, unless you did it on purpose:
"Cloudy is the skies" has to be "cloudy are the skies."
Very nice work. *Smile*


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Prompt 1 · 11-30-05 2:45pm
by angel2blue
*Star* Re: Prompt 1 · 11-30-05 2:56pm
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Re: Re: Prompt 1 · 11-30-05 3:06pm
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