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Apr 3, 2008 at 9:47pm
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Searching for Exposure
Hello distinguished writers. I joined this site several days ago and have posted several poems which are not getting much feedback. This is no surprise, as my work is heavily metaphorical and my intent is sometimes obscure. I therefore have decided to post the first chapter of my unfinished short story, “Gordon’s Lair”, a much easier read than my poetry. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. If anyone is interested, I will post the full-length when it is completed. I also have posted one of my easier poems just in case anyone is interested.

thanks!
-J. A. Burnett


 Gordon's Lair: Chapter One  (E)
The first chapter of an unfinished short story. Full length will be posted.
#1409477 by J. A. Burnett


 We, the Seated  (E)
From my work-in-progress: "Somethings, Nothings and Inner Stirrings"
#1408881 by J. A. Burnett
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Searching for Exposure · 04-03-08 9:47pm
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