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Nov 2, 2011 at 10:35am
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Rip the first chapter of The Mercenaries apart, please. ^_^
Hey there,
Thanks for opening my link.
There's this novel I'm working on and I'd like as many reviews as possible.
 The Mercenaries - Chapter 1  (E)
Being a spy isn't all that it's made out to be.
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Rip the first chapter of The Mercenaries apart, please. ^_^ · 11-02-11 10:35am
by Vaichi10

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