Noticing Newbies

I am a new writer, having accidentally taken a creative non-fiction writing class two years ago. I thought I would re-learn how to write college level papers for grad school, but I found a new calling instead. I have posted some items from my journal assignments and one larger piece that was my final semester paper. I don't think it can be posted in the area where we ask for reviews, because it is about opioid over-prescription, and if I understood the rules, even legal drug use is prohibited there. Anyone who has the time is welcome to read and comment on what I have, I would love the feedback. Thanks!