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Aug 31, 2018 at 1:58pm
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YA fantasy story
I am working on a fantasy/dystopia story. The protagonist(s) is/are young women, call them elvish. Their mission is to save the last Pegasus from the antagonist, call him/them Goblin. The Pegasus need saving because their feathers are the last known energy, burning the feathers allows the Goblins to fly and make war on the elves.
This is a bit of what I have.
 
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untitled-unfinished  (18+)
Elvish sisters try to save the world.
#2084584 by Danger Mouse
What questions about their world come to your mind?

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YA fantasy story · 08-31-18 1:58pm
by Danger Mouse
Re: YA fantasy story · 09-01-18 10:48am
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Re: Re: YA fantasy story · 09-01-18 11:30am
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