Here's something to consider: your character(s) have to sit through this scene in its unedited form, but do your readers? The lengthy, boring parts can pass in a matter of a sentence or two, with you concentrating on giving your readers the important parts that they need.
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Regards,
Eric Fretheim
"It is perfectly okay to write garbage-- as long as you edit brilliantly." ~C.J. Cherryh
"Success is the ability to go from failure to failure without losing your enthusiasm." ~Winston Churchill
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