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Aug 31, 2019 at 6:43am
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Re: Show Actions
by Vagus
Depending on what you're writing, you can do whatever you want. But if you're sticking with tradition: Jon looked into the doorway and yelled, "Hey you."

I will put brackets into prose as placeholders for information or writing im not feeling at the moment.

eg:
John was walking down [name] street with a gansta limp and a bag of [some kinda red candy]. He spotted [neighbor]'s door was open and lost all interest in swallowing the mass of red glop in his mouth. [john chainsaws his way through the house and yadda yadda end with something about a red stain on his shirt]

But then i seed in the deets during the editing and eliminate the brackets. I'm not really committed to the chainsaw either. He might pick up a rock in the front garden and do the whole family that way. John is messed up like that.
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Show Actions · 08-31-19 2:31am
by A Non-Existent User
Re: Show Actions · 08-31-19 2:49am
by Zen
*Star* Re: Show Actions · 08-31-19 6:43am
by Vagus

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