I've been making a horror story, and I can't seem to finish it at all! Problem: the climax.
Oh yes, the climax is when the MCs discover something inhuman has been killing people, then get into this messed up chase through the forest, meanwhile someone dies. I can't get it to look natural! I look like I'm saying, "She grabbed his hand and raced past gnarled trees. She slipped on a few roots. The creature's growling seemed to follow them by a few yards..."
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