by Odessa Molinari best. I approve heartily of the different take on the word "murder," the dialogue is the most natural and believable and the denoument most surprising. There is no hint in the run up to the ending that we're going to have to reconsider the meaning of the operative word before we're finished. There is a minor typo in that an errant finger has stated that crows "are" carrion (they're not - they eat it) but that is understandable in this computer age when the machine conspires with our need for speed to twist what we intend to say. The title, too, is clever.
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best. I approve heartily of the different take on the word "murder," the dialogue is the most natural and believable and the denoument most surprising. There is no hint in the run up to the ending that we're going to have to reconsider the meaning of the operative word before we're finished. There is a minor typo in that an errant finger has stated that crows "are" carrion (they're not - they eat it) but that is understandable in this computer age when the machine conspires with our need for speed to twist what we intend to say. The title, too, is clever. 
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