I adore you. Just a great line!
He scanned her critically and beamed approval. Interesting!
If I had a flower for every time I thought of you, I could walk in my garden forever. Very old-fashioned. Wouldn't work!
She didn’t miss his obvious examination and approval. I would run from this sentence. Very ugly.
The smoldering flame she saw in his eyes startled her. The start of something erotic?
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