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Feb 26, 2021 at 2:37pm
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Plug of a short story I'm proud of
Hey folks,
I recently wrote this piece for The Writer's Cramp contest for 2-27 and am pretty proud of it. I'd love your input on how I could improve. It's 18+ for language.

 Winter and Spring  (18+)
A girl who hates spring and loves winter.
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Plug of a short story I'm proud of · 02-26-21 2:37pm
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