Thank you so much Max for your insightful review and comments. I've been straining my brain a bit on how to continue and you've shown me how to make this story much better than it currently is, as well as how to continue. I do often write in the first person, but I wanted this story to end up being in the view of the three young dragons who eventually hatch from the eggs. I obviously forgot about the third-person limited POV.
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