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Jan 23, 2022 at 9:24am
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Please Review: The Pharaoh of Ayubia
This is a short story I worked on, but I need improvement on how I can make this a much more stronger story

 The Pharaoh of Ayubia   (18+)
A humble captain leads the Pharoah of Ayubia on a perilous mission
#2265825 by Tiberius
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Please Review: The Pharaoh of Ayubia · 01-23-22 9:24am
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