Crosstimbers Review Forum

Thank you for sharing your amusing monologue. However, this page is specifically for requesting critiques of fiction. It excludes items like essays and screenplays since i don't have any expertise in these and thus can't give useful feedback. That's even more true for comic monologues. I enjoy George Carlin as much as the next guy, but I don't even have a theoretical basis for thinking about what makes a monologue like this funny.

For this reason, while I enjoyed what you send, I'll respectfully decline your request to provide a critique.

Max Griffin
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