Crosstimbers Review Forum

I'm sorry to learn you had a bad experience before, and I'm deeply complimented that you've trusted me with your story. I do hope that I meet your expectations.

I just read through it, and it's quite good...moving, in fact. I really feel the narrator's anguish. I'll give you more detailed comments later--probably tomorrow. However, I can already tell I won't have too much in the way of suggestions. it's really well done.

I've experienced toxic types myself. But I've been lucky that the supportive types have made the experience here worth it. You're talented, so I hope you stick around and we get to know each other better.

Max

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