Oh yay, thank you! I really appreciate your considered feedback and I will think deeply on it.
I guess that I was worried about bogging things down or being predictable (Overthinkers unite--once we've gone through every possible reason to!) hahaha.
A lot more about Skyllar, who she is and all that happens in the "first" chapter, that comes next.
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