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Sep 26, 2022 at 12:36am
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The Leader of Javin

Just finished creating my September entry into this contest. And I did it a little bit differently this month. I prefer to write in the first Present Tense. But there have been several Reviewers who have commented that it should be Past Tense. That is what this Short Story is written in. Except for maybe the dialogue, this Short Story has been written in Past Tense. At least I hope that it is. I don’t think that I have made any errors in Tenses. But I wouldn’t be surprised if there are a few of them.

 The Leader of Javin  (18+)
With some individuals, it’s hard to make them tell the truth. I’m not one of them.
#2281689 by PureSciFi

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What you are about to read is true. Nothing needed to be changed. After all, this has already been translated into a language that we all know and understand - English (German, French, Italian, Russian, etc.).
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The Leader of Javin · 09-26-22 12:36am
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