Your story sounds interesting. Sometimes I wonder if 15 yr old kids are capable of running anything, other times I wouldn't be surprised if they can change the world. Just not sure if it's for the better or not. At 15 I didn't care about the entire world, just mine.
It's hard to give you a full opinion so my suggestion to you would be to post a few chapters for people to read and review for you. That will give you a better understanding of what anyone truly thinks.
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