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Give me things to review! I'm a lazy bum when it comes to looking for items to review. (That and, I'm a bit limited on internet time lately.) However, if someone points something out to me, I am always more than happy to give a review! It doesn't cost anything, and probably not so many people will use this In&Out except those who know me, but... leave me a little note if you'd like something reviewed! I am more than happy to take a look at it. All of my reviews are in-depth, and I'll give you as much help as I can.  I will note, however, I am not one of those who will go through and find every single grammar, spelling, and punctuation mistake you made, and tell you how to fix it. I will point out the nature of the mistakes, though, and give you hints on how to find and fix them yourself - so you can grow in your writing abilities, rather than have someone else doing it for you.I also make the reviews all public, so you can get a bit more exposure for your piece, and perhaps get even MORE reviews. The description of my rating system is here: "Invalid Item"  .There is no limit to the rating of an item that you can post here, so lay it on me! I'll read most anything. Remember, though, that the content of your post, the name of your item, and the brief description of your item have to fall within the 18+ rating of this In&Out. If you want to see how my progression through reviewing has gone, see "Invalid Item" If you want to see my recently posted public reviews, see http://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback.php?action=rrs&only_user_id=sarajean . Disclaimer: Depending on my available time and the length of the requested piece, it may take me a few days. Fear not! I will review you. If I miss something, I apologize. I get a lot of requests, and sometimes they are accidentally overlooked. If you've not gotten a response in a week or so, feel free to post again if you see that I've been reviewing others below or above you, but not you. If it is a particularly long piece, or you've put several chapters up in a row (3 or more), I might just be saving you until I have time to review you all at once - so don't fear. |
Requester: RudolphTheRedHairedBoy 🌈   any feedback is appreciated ~~
Requester: the Wordy Jay Any help on how to polish up this piece and tighten the plot would be very much appreciated!
Requester: Hope's Twisted Tales This prologue is a recap of the lesser-known myth of Eros and Psyche. That and the fall of Psyche (my invention) is crucial to understanding the story that will follow. I'd love some feedback on how it's presented and if it works for an opening. Thanks!
Requester: D.L. Glenn Hello! This is the 1st of a 15story saga I'm doing. Would very much like a lady's take on the irrational meeting of my two lovers from different worlds. TY for your time!
Requester: Gonnabee I hope you have some time to check it out. I have some well read friends that have said good things, but I am anxious to gage my work with unbiased readers. Holding my breath...but tell it like it is.
Requester: Sara♥Jean  I reviewed this one a LONG time ago, but it's still JUST as cute. I hope it got published!
Requester: LJPC - the tortoise It's 1200 words. If you have time, take a look at it before 7/30 please (publishing deadline). If not, no prob.
Requester: Zoe Hi again! I took into account all your advice and have done a fair bit of editing. Chapter 3 is what orginally was Chapter 2 (got rid of prologue). I have added a new chapter too :)Any more advice/review would be much appreciated. Thank you heaps. Zoe~
Requester: ~A.J. Lyle~ Hiya, I wrote this for a prompt contest and I'm not too sure that the prompts fit well. If you could take a look I would appreciate it. :)
Requester: Sara♥Jean This is certainly an interesting read, and a great beginning to a book!
Requester: Sara♥Jean Well, the title is accurate - it is definitely strange! I think once this has been reworked to add more continuity, it is going to be an absolutely amazing item.
Requester: Sara♥Jean Fascinating beginning!
Requester: Sara♥Jean This one didn't speak to me quite as well. :-( But thank you so much for sharing!
Requester: Sara♥Jean I really enjoyed this one! I think it could use a little more description, but is otherwise wonderful.
Requester: Zoe I'm working on a few things at the moment, this is my latest. Please let me know If I'm getting anywhere on this one. Thanks :)
Requester: Sara♥Jean This is an interesting little tale that is off to a good start! I look forward to seeing where it goes.
Requester: Andrew What? Two? The nerve! Hehe... but I'd really, really like this one reviewed too! I want to see if what I was trying to do worked (but I'm not telling; that'd ruin the fun, eh?), but I only have a couple real reviews so far. Thanks again!
Requester: Andrew I wrote this last month, but it still needs work. I have one nice review so far, but another would be great!
Requester: Sara♥Jean I reviewed this as best I could. I hope at least some of it helps!
Requester: Writing at Midnight After years of dry spells, I have my first poem. If you could review I would appreciate it.
Requester: Sara♥Jean This is going to be such a great book! I loved it.
Requester: LJPC - the tortoise You're a great reviewer! This is long & I'll pay GPs commensurate. Is Ch 1 interesting enough as a hook? Is there enough description?
Requester: Sara♥Jean This was an interesting read! I just think it'd be better as a 2nd or 3rd chapter. Let me know!
Requester: Anucel Tell me what'cha think, please? I could use some pointers in writing, in fact i'm sure I could, and would welcome any critique, gentle or harsh.
Requester: Sara♥Jean Teenagers are strange beings... and this shows something that is believable for them to do. Let me know if you edit!
Requester: Sara♥Jean This is an interesting and strong beginning to what ought to be a beautiful story! And it even has a happy ending... sort of.
Requester: swantonist lalala
Requester: Crafty Ninja If you're looking for something to review, I would appriciate feedback on the script I'm writing
Requester: Faery Please have a look at this
Requester: Sara♥Jean What an exciting beginning! This is great.
Requester: Sara♥Jean This is a great entry for the site's contest! I wish you the best of luck.
Requester: SirWriteALot Thanks
Requester: Pyper working hard on project Short story entry for the Quotation Inspiration conest for october. Please let me know what needs improvement. Thanks!
Requester: Sara♥Jean I look forward to reading this again once some edits have gone through. Don't forget to repost!
Requester: Sara♥Jean This is a mischievous little tale!
Requester: Sara♥Jean This has the potential to be a great story, it just needs some gaps filled in. Write on!
Requester: Sara♥Jean I like this little sci-fi piece! It was a very neat read.
Requester: S R Clowes Death of a Mentor.
Requester: Lee Burnette Hi, I haven't had anyone read this yet....what do you think?
Requester: Angelica- House Florent B & W  This should put you to work. :-d
Requester: Andrew Most definitely a work in progress, and something fairly different from what I usually write. Written in a very short time, so I know there's stuff I need to fix. Pointers would be great!
Requester: Sara♥Jean This is a good beginning! Thanks for letting me read it.
Requester: Sara♥Jean Another great poem. Thank you for sharing!
Requester: Sara♥Jean I really, really like this one. A whole lot!
Requester: Sara♥Jean This one is a little choppy, but has great potential. I like it.
Requester: Sara♥Jean Wow! There's a lot of edits in there - this is really coming along nicely.
Requester: Sara♥Jean This is definitely a cute little ditty! An enjoyable read. :)
Requester: Sara♥Jean This isn't bad at all for a very first story! Hopefully posting publicly for you will get you a few more reviews. :)
Requester: Belinda_HauntedMo I have revised "Edge of Reality" and would love to have you review it again!
Requester: Taylor Peppers My most recent work and Im still looking for feedback.
Requester: Taylor Peppers A SUPER short read. Let me know what you think.
Requester: Taylor Peppers give me your interpretation.
Requester: Sara♥Jean This is a very, very sad scene. Thank you for sharing.
Requester: Magoo I would love a review when you have time, thank you.
Requester: Britney Please review any of these, THANK YOU!
Requester: Boris The Blade this is the first thing that i wrote, it's not much long and about the grammar and spelling, English is not my native language
Requester: Andrew ...and this one's gotten mixed reviews which haven't said much and leave me a little confused... :-/
Requester: Andrew Pretty please! The reviews I've gotten haven't had much substance, unfortunately. Thanks!
Requester: Memory sweet 16 I figure someone needs to review this before dust settles on it.
Requester: Sara♥Jean Yay for the town banding together! Very interesting. :)
Requester: Sara♥Jean What an unusual and shocking story! I greatly enjoyed it.
Requester: Sara♥Jean The description in this piece is just great!
Requester: Sara♥Jean Very interesting! And... very sad.
Requester: LJPC - the tortoise I want to submit this little story to an e-zine by the end of the month. Any suggestions re: clarity would be helpful.
Requester: LJPC - the tortoise I want to submit this little story to an e-zine by the end of the month. Any suggestions re: clarity would be helpful.
Requester: PaulieCelt This is actually a folder containing the first three chapters of an erotic novel (possibly!). But the first chapter is quite short, and the three combined are probably no longer than an average short story.
Requester: Kristina Please could you review this when you have time?Thank you so much!
Requester: Belinda_HauntedMo Please read and review this piece when you have time? Thanks!
Requester: Sara♥Jean This one is interesting! I imagine there is more to the story (or will be). I wish you the best of luck with it.
Requester: Mistress Mayhem This is the start of a paranormal romance I'm writing. Let me know what you think.
Requester: Sara♥Jean Got it! Creepy and interesting - thanks for letting me read!
Requester: Sara♥Jean What an interesting read! It has some cosmetic things to tweak, but it's going to be a great, informative item.
Requester: Sara♥Jean Oh no! It's set so I can't read it. I sent an email to see if we could fix that.
Requester: narin Pl review Tips for Apparel Merchandisers
Requester: Lorien I'm hoping to submit this to a suspense/horror e-zine in October, so any comments you have would be greatly appreciated!
Requester: Sara♥Jean I'm back and doing this again! Put in your items that you'd like reviewed!
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