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Rated: 18+ · In & Out · Dark · #1986284
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Have a piece of Dark Poetry and/or Prose that you'd like to share with the group? Have some Dark Pieces you'd like feedback on? Submit them here and I'll try and review them as much as possible to help and please feel free to read other members works and review for them as well.

ALL ratings of dark poetry/prose are allowed here just please make sure they are properly rated so that others who may not want to read 18+ don't have to. Thank you!

Before reading be sure and read the description and rating of each poem so as to not be offended by any content. Thank you!

Thank you and enjoy the Dark Side!

Author: Chérie
Notes: A girl is escaping her kidnapper's house during a crisp morning in October. She tiptoes in the garden as her kidnapper, an man, is sleeping on the sofa. But as she is creeping around, the man comes outside and she realises that there's no escaping. Ever!

Poetry		Item & Rating: White, Lace Nightgown     (E)
Genre(s): Death :: Fantasy :: Horror/Scary
Description: A girl, dressed in a white, lace nightgown, is running away from her captor's house.
Author: slowmotionsunset
Notes: My latest Horror poem...needs feedback!

Poetry		Item & Rating: Many-Eyed     (13+)
Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Political :: Dark
Description: The Khmer Rouge have a new way to keep track of their citizens.
Author: T.L.Finch
Notes: An epitaph for a vampire

Poetry		Item & Rating: Into The Darkness     (18+)
Genre(s): Other :: Other :: Other
Description: Something for All Hallows Eve
Author: WakeUpAndLive️~🚬🚭2024
Notes: Reviews appreciated.

Short Story		Item & Rating: A Laughing Goddess Rhamnusia     (18+)
Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Drama :: Dark
Description: A dish served cold
Author: Tammy
Notes: I wrote this after an atheist blogger of my country was hacked to death by fanatics, who claimed to be good Muslims. WARNING! This item contains sentences that may hurt religious groups.

Other		Item & Rating: Apocalypse     (GC)
Genre(s): Dark :: Death :: Religious
Description: It is about weapon business and its connection to terrorist activities worldwide.
Author: kk
Notes: I just got some great news. One of my shorts is being published! The thing is the publisher requested more work. Above is an old poem I just finished. If anyone is willing to take the time to give me some feedback, I would much appreciate it! Thanks. KK

Poetry		Item & Rating: Tick. Tock.     (E)
Genre(s): Other :: Other :: Other
Description: Your time is up.
Author: Cobe
Notes: A short horror story toying with Victorian style writing (aka-Dracula). I'd like to expand it and would welcome any thoughts on directions to take.

Short Story		Item & Rating: The Trouble with Thomas     (18+)
Genre(s): Other
Description: A Victorian Horror Story
Author: Alexandra Burningham
Notes: Written in Prose form . No profanity. No graphic content

Prose		Item & Rating: Place of Solitude     (E)
Genre(s): Personal :: Contest Entry :: Other
Description: This is a Letter I wrote in Prose style for a contest
Author: Mr. Palindrome
Notes: New Poem. No obscenities and No graphic content, except some violence. Reviews and remarks welcome.

Poetry		Item & Rating: True Love     (18+)
Genre(s): Dark
Description: Love has many sides...
Author: DyrHearte writes
Notes: I wrote this some 12 years ago when I was encouraged to express/release some of my childhood/adolescent pain. It is currently free style and I'd like suggestions on how to make it more traditional or improve on form. If it needs improving.

Poetry		Item & Rating: The Narrow Alley     (ASR)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Experience :: Personal
Description: My life lived in a narrow alley.
Author: Marci Missing Everyone
Notes: Picture is a little gory. Mild gore with supernatural references. Rated 18+. No profanity.

Poetry		Item & Rating: In the Midst of the Morning Mist     (18+)
Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Dark :: Emotional
Description: the trail of blood...
Author: Koyel~writing again
Notes: A dark fantasy poem. Reviews encouraged.

Poetry		Item & Rating: Goosebumps     (E)
Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Fantasy :: Horror/Scary
Description: For Alice's Curiosity Shop Writing Contest
Author: Koyel~writing again
Notes: Please review. Want some feedback honestly.

Poetry		Item & Rating: The Mystery Cry     (E)
Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Ghost :: Horror/Scary
Description: For the Formwork Poetry Contest, a quinzaine.
Author: DyrHearte writes
Notes: A short monologue telling why suicide may not be a viable option. I hope you enjoy.

Monologue		Item & Rating: Drowning a Ghost     (13+)
Genre(s): Adult :: Death :: Ghost
Description: Suicide or mistake or both?
Author: 🌕 HuntersMoon
Notes: When is a dream not a dream? Some disturbing content; no obscenities, not too graphic.

Poetry		Item & Rating: Conflagration     (13+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Death :: Horror/Scary
Description: When is a dream not a dream?
Author: PandaPaws Licensed VetTech
Notes: I am brand new to this group. I hope you enjoy this.

Poetry		Item & Rating: My Inner Despair     (13+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Experience :: Emotional
Description: A dark poem exposing despair. Written for Stormy's Poetry contest.
Author: ren (baby no. 2 due in June)
Notes: A poem about self harm and depression.

Poetry		Item & Rating: The Broken Piece Of Glass     (18+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Death :: Emotional
Description: A poem about being broken.
Author: ren (baby no. 2 due in June)
Notes: Today's NapoWriMo

Poetry		Item & Rating: I Steal Pieces Of Your Soul To Survive     (18+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Emotional
Description: and can not stop.
Author: 🌑 Darleen - QoD
Notes: Dark, no profanity or other worries, based on round 1 picture prompt of DD poetry contest

Poetry		Item & Rating: Lost in a Witch's Dream     (E)
Genre(s): Dark
Description: Inspired from the picture prompt from my own poetry contest
Author: ren (baby no. 2 due in June)
Notes: A bit weird.

Poetry		Item & Rating: Wretched Hollow     (18+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Emotional :: Personal
Description: For all to see.
Author: ren (baby no. 2 due in June)
Notes: An older poem from a few months ago. Has violence.

Poetry		Item & Rating: Refinement     (18+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Emotional :: Personal
Description: A poem about refinement at it's worst.
Author: Hanna
Notes: When changes are made in one's body, it has an impact on life itself.

Other		Item & Rating: No Longer A woman     (ASR)
Genre(s): Biographical :: Emotional
Description: What I felt after going through that op... the despair and the hope.
Author: 🌑 Darleen - QoD
Notes: About Suicide though not graphic

Poetry		Item & Rating: One Last Bath     (13+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Death
Description: One last bath before the end
Author: 🌑 Darleen - QoD
Notes: First Draft. No obscenities or graphic content.

Poetry		Item & Rating: Scorned     (13+)
Genre(s): Dark
Description: Suffer the wrath of a woman scorned

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