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Review by Valerie O
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Overall Impression:
Interesting

Spelling and Grammar:
I see no errors

Suggestions:
none

Additional Comments:
The title really pulls the reader in. I really like the way you mentioned different colors. I could see the sunset.

Keep Writing!

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