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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the baby dragon dreaming to be human. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like the interaction between the mother and baby dragon because it reminded me of my childhood.

Final Thoughts: This is a wonderful children's story. Write on.

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