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Hi there aenzieh!

How are you today! I hope everything went great and your writing gone terrific so far. I am glad you picked me to review this piece about your life. In fact, this review would be my first one submitted for this year. Yeah, I'm not an active reviewer this year but with this kind of piece, how could I say no?

You know what, I love to read other's autobiography. I don't know. Maybe because mine is not worth reading *Laugh* or I just want to learn from other's experiences which I think is good.

Now talking about this piece, wow! You don't know how much this moved me. You touched me with this so tenderly that I wanted to shed my tears. That part when your family neglected you or had changed their treatment because you confessed to them that you hate the thing that they wanted you to do and accomplish broke my heart. I don't know why they were like that. They could at least support whatever you want to do. Well, I guess because they are not your 100% family. But that shouldn't be.

I salute you for having the courage to confess. Because I know how difficult it is to dwell in a house you so hated. I mean how hard it is to do things you don't like. The result of it would never be the best. Look how you improved after choosing the endeavor you want to take. Lots of things were brought to life, talents you discovered, such as your interest on public speaking, which is just one great skill or talent.

I know you will find success in whatever you do because you are courageous and determined. And I know that one day, they'll understand you and even salute you for what you did. After all, it's your life. And you're free to do whatever you wish. Just don't let everyone hinders you for becoming great. Not even the people you call family. Because having the freedom will tantamount to greatness. So live with it.

Thank you for sharing this life story. If I am your prof teacher for this. I'll rate this A+.

Keep up the things you wanted to do! Write on!

Best regards,
GERVIC 🐉 House Targaryen


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