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Hurricane What's-his-name  [13+]
"On what wings dare he aspire?" William Blake
by A.T.B: It'sWhatWeDo
Review by Charlie ~
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello A.T.B: It'sWhatWeDo .

Drew!! Thanks for pointing me in this direction. This was an absolutely gorgeous read. I loved every second of it. Now I get to play the, "Why did he specifically pick this one" game. It's a lot of fun, let me tell you. *Wink* *Laugh*

You have such a way with words. The scenes you write are so intense and realistic, it feels like people-watching. I found myself reading and then re-reading entire paragraphs because they were so well-written. I feel like everything I read of yours is just a little bit better than the last thing. I don't think I've ever read a storm described quite like this. You know when people say "Show, don't tell"? I feel like sections of this story should be taken out and used as an example for what that piece of writing advice means. You don't just tell the reader that it's lightning, you show them the lightning.

I felt like I could identify with the characters so easily, especially Carly. He and Joey both were so realistic. Nothing in their dialogue or their actions felt out of place or out of character. I can tell that you've worked a lot with these characters. Enough to know how to bring them to life like real people.

Like, I wish I had some constructive criticism, but I just don't. Worst.Review.Ever.

I love this though. What should I read next? *Heart*


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