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 NEWSPAPER  [E]
A "Newspaper" Acrostic
by Meg
Review of NEWSPAPER  
Review by Walker
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: This definitely rings true that several places in the world are turning more towards technology like television or the internet to read news, yet in some places people may still rely on a hand held paper to learn of what is going on in the news. Newspapers seem old and a bit outdated to those with technology use that provides the same news at a faster rate, yet at the same time it's a pleasure to those eager to learn news at their fingertips but through the paper form instead of the internet.

Suggestions: No errors were noticed through the reading. I have no suggestions on ways to improve the writing. The writing flows nicely throughout and doesn't vary from the topic.

Final Thoughts: You've done a great job on making the acrostic more of a flow of thought, tying in each letter nicely versus making each line describe something different about a newspaper. It is very thought provoking. Will newspapers be of no use eventually in areas with computers that make searching and reading news much quicker and readily available?

Keep up the great writing!
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