Introducing my new style of reviews, hope u like it.🐤😇😺😸

Thanx to writing.com and the WDC reviewers I'm now trying to capture the art of professional reviewing. So now I will be using this same framework for many poems that I read, filling in as per regards each poem. It's my own style of review as inspired by some of the reviews I have received here.

My best favourite line/lines in your poem: " the winter moon, as a moonlover, I loved that. And also ,' sapphires braided...' wow that was artsy.

My thoughts as to your content: I think this is sublime and does it describe the moon throughout coz that's what I tink n what I admired it for, poets can have perceptions different than intended so I can't be sure. Really a dreamy poetic moony poem that I enjoyed . Apt fabulous title too wow.


Words/diction that I admired: ' silken' yeah I like that word, poetic charms. And unbridled, how u used it for the travelling moon, and xenias, am a flowerlover too u see.

Phrasings/metaphors/similes that I admired: "diamond crusted hooves' yay the moons diamond hooves in metaphor, wow so imaginative. 'Meadows of imagination ' yeah superb that. And 'stardust twists...' . Beautiful.

Rhyming word choices pairs that I admired /Meter rhythm wordings that I liked: 'court her, lead her'

Flow rating: it flows well for freeverse

Rhyming quality/ freeverse meter rhythm : This is freeverse and has a fantastic muse style sequence.



What I didn't like about the poem: Nothing I didn't like, really. Upon a second read I realise u could be meaning a unicorn, that gives it a fantasy element, apt for the contest, yet I find fantasy too much a stretch of the imagination, such that though I could enjoy it like I did yours, I prefer to write on reality. And believe me there are people who do find my writings very interesting despite being focused on reality. But I know westerners love fantasy.
Your last line sums it for me, yet this poem is to be appreciated more by adults.
Line/lines I didn't like: " a queens standard,' I just didn't understand that,


So Nice to read from your pen, I hope u too will breakdown n critique more of my poems.


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