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for Grandma Joy: a pantoum  [E]
every time we talk, I remind her who I am
by Rhyssa
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: If there is a disease I hate as bad as I had cancer it has to be dementia and alzheimer's. I have had to watch helplessly as dementia to my father and grandfather before him and I fear that I may be its next target in my family. It seems to kill the men in my family when they are eighty years six months old as both my father and grandfather were that age when they passed. Its awful dreading what I know may be coming. Your poem described it well.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I could tell you felt passionately about the subject. My condolences for your loss.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the perfect score.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum.

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