Hi again Jellyfish-on holiday ! I'm back in your port again to give you another review in celebration of your anniversary month!

This is such a unique idea, I've never seen anything like it on WDC before! You say it was created for a contest? I'm curious what contest that was. Do you remember? I really liked the variety of articles you have here and your writing style as well. Very professional and engaging. The only thing I could think of that might make the articles better was if they had images

There were just a few typos I spotted. Your words are in red below and my suggestions are after:

passion for travelling but so far the group has only attracted two members add a comma before "but"

get my group off the ground" Last year add a period after ground

contest with a holiday theme but it has since been closed down comma before "but"

"On the 22nd of April," Writes lowercase writes

I also noticed that iKïyå§ama-House Targaryen must have changed her username to "satet." That's a quick fix

You had several great lines in these articles, but my favorite that actually made me laugh out loud was, "Today, there will be weather all over the World." Very funny! Well done!

Have a great day! Take care,
Emily

You responded to this review 09/10/2018 @ 4:24pm EDT

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